I usually read this on my phone but I happened to be on on my laptop for your most recent update - anyways, I was able to see the layout. I do like the idea of it, but I think the story area is a little hard to read. I think adjusting the opacity a bit more will make it easier to read :) Otherwise, I'm still really enjoying the story and I look forward to seeing where it will go.
October 29th, 2012 at 09:55pm
