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  • Quadrtip

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    Okay, first off, I love the different names of the chapters, with all the different artists! I only read the first to chapters, but I like the odd names, the descriptions are short and understandable, saying everything you need to know in a few sentances
    August 20th, 2013 at 01:12am
  • TheCrazyOne

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    This was- wow. Just wow.

    I don't usually delve into the depths of fanfiction, simply because the stories (in my personal opinion) seem to only portray lives of Mary Sues and that gets old after a while (I'm not saying that original stories don't have the problem, I just feel like it's more prominent in fanfics). With that being said-

    You managed to characterize everyone perfectly. The main characters seemed believable and felt real, which is something every author should aim for! I loved loved loved Alaska and Ava so so so much.

    The story line was great and the ending was perfect. (Yey happy endings!)

    All in all, you did a great job! Thank you for writing this!
    June 30th, 2013 at 12:01am
  • dizzydisaster

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    this was absolutely perfect, i need more. omg
    February 28th, 2013 at 10:05am
  • GirlWithFlowerDress

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    i'm crying so much right now because of the ending it's sooooooooooooooo fucking cute! loved the plot and everythign! WELL DONE!
    February 22nd, 2013 at 09:21pm
  • SignalFire

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    Just read all of this! That ending was seriously cute and unexpected!! Loved it!!
    February 22nd, 2013 at 01:09am
  • LastChance.

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    @ Rev. Micki Plague

    Aww thank you im glad you enjoyed it :-)
    February 12th, 2013 at 08:47am
  • Rev. Micki Plague

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    @ LastChance.
    You are a great writer though because you got every detail in there :)
    February 12th, 2013 at 03:59am
  • LastChance.

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    @ twejacobbr

    I could never kill him off!
    February 11th, 2013 at 06:31pm
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    @ Rev. Micki Plague

    Haha that song waa actually planned from the start
    February 11th, 2013 at 05:17pm
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    That was really really clever. It's like you wrote the entire story with those lyrics in mind, it fits perfectly. I love it :) Know what would be brilliant though? SEQUEL!!! :P
    February 11th, 2013 at 04:25pm
  • twejacobbr

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    I knowww!! I was jumpingggup and down for that! Lol!!!!
    February 11th, 2013 at 01:58pm
  • LastChance.

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    @ twejacobbr

    Haha thank you and I didn't kill him off!
    February 11th, 2013 at 08:02am
  • twejacobbr

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    AAAAAHHHH!! Tears in my eyes!!!! AMAAAAAAAAZING! Holyyy sh******t! Lol, wow. What i reaaallyy REAAAAALY enjoyed was the whole flashback thing, that i thought was an AWESOME touch! Bravooooo! Perfect PERFECTTTTTT ending!!!! I would recommend this story overrr andover if i could!!!! Fantastic!!
    February 11th, 2013 at 04:51am
  • collidewiththesky

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    no i really liked the way everything tied together in the end, don't doubt yourself. you're a great writer! ☺
    February 11th, 2013 at 04:44am
  • LastChance.

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    @ useyourtelescope
    Oh my daisies thank you i am literally sat grinning bdcause you liked it. It means a lot you took the time to comment :)
    February 11th, 2013 at 01:10am
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    @ collidewiththesky

    Really? Ive literally just been sat panicking since ive posted worried that everyone would hate it!
    February 11th, 2013 at 01:09am
  • useyourtelescope

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    I JUST DIED THE ENDING OMFG THE BIGGEST GRIN IS ON MY FACE AHHHHHHHHH
    February 11th, 2013 at 01:08am
  • collidewiththesky

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    THIS WAS SO SWEET AND PERFECT AND I LOVE IT ☺ perfect ending :-)
    February 11th, 2013 at 01:06am
  • twejacobbr

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    Nooo! Greatly dislikeee this!!! Lol, ughghghg!
    February 8th, 2013 at 05:14am
  • collidewiththesky

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    proud of her and i hope they make up next chapter! ☺
    February 8th, 2013 at 02:55am
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