Here, Darling. - Comments

haha constipated Jack!lol Great job! I love how Zack is being all sweet you are doing a very good job of portraying them the way I imagine them to be :)

Omg!! Love Zack!!! And Alaskaaaa! They are sooo ment to be! He always acts sweet around her, so quiet and shy!! Oh uh, but whats going to happen when he finds out about Ava!!!

I love Zack but I think Jack should take her on a date to piss Zack off!! Haha Seriously I think you should let the story flow and which ever guy Lask gets is because it was meant to be ;)

Go Zack! Go Zack! Go Zack!! Yayay. Yesssss!!! I love Alaska and Zackk!! Yaya for updateingg!! Thank you thank yaaa!! =)

Okaay comment swap! I'm really enjoying it so far. You have a nice balance of talking and description. Plus, the description that is in there is really nice. The first chapter really draws you in and unlike many stories, after the first chapter you have a good sense of what's going on in the story. So, good job and keep up the good work. :D

I am agreeing with Twejacobbr I am all for a Zack/Lask Thing! <3 Or Jack..I fucking love Jack. haha Great update! I love the tone of this story and your style!

Ohh noooo!! Lol, i kinda see Zack and Alaska together!!! Hahaha

Very intresting story! I really am liking it. I like how you never really know what is going to happen. Another good thing you did was give a basic description of the characters background. What im wondering is if each chapter will be in a diffferent characters description or if it will remain to be Lucy. Either way, you have one more subscriber! Cant wait to see what happens when Talla gets there!! =)
Update soon!

Love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter. And whose John or maybe you just meant to put zack but put John?

Okay, I think the first thing I should say is that Zack Merrick is one of my favourite people pretty much ever. Oh and I do really like All Time Low, so I was pretty pleased about getting this in the Comment Swap! The font is a little hard to read, though, so maybe you should go for something a little easier on the eyes. But other than that, I really enjoyed the story - it kept me interested throughout and there were a few nice surprises.

I love Zack Merrick, haven't read anything about him in a while. I'm not really into band fiction though so that might have something to do with it, haha. I really had trouble reading this, your font is super small.

I sort of thought this was a little cliche, I suppose, but not super predictable, so that's good. I liked her name, that's the name of the girl in Looking For Alaska, and I love that book!

I kinda got confused, there are a lot of names in your first chapter and it's a lot to keep up with.

I love the first paragraph! The opening line was just perfect, and it definitely grabbed my interest.
I was really surprised to see the direction you took this story! I like that none of the characters are perfect, which is something you don't come across too often. I thought it was really sweet how Alaska took Lucy under her wing and showed her the ropes.
I love how you introduced the boys in chapter two! Lucy got really sassy with Zack and I felt bad for him Poor Zack!