Here, Darling. - Comments

Okay, first off, I love the different names of the chapters, with all the different artists! I only read the first to chapters, but I like the odd names, the descriptions are short and understandable, saying everything you need to know in a few sentances

This was- wow. Just wow.

I don't usually delve into the depths of fanfiction, simply because the stories (in my personal opinion) seem to only portray lives of Mary Sues and that gets old after a while (I'm not saying that original stories don't have the problem, I just feel like it's more prominent in fanfics). With that being said-

You managed to characterize everyone perfectly. The main characters seemed believable and felt real, which is something every author should aim for! I loved loved loved Alaska and Ava so so so much.

The story line was great and the ending was perfect. (Yey happy endings!)

All in all, you did a great job! Thank you for writing this!

this was absolutely perfect, i need more. omg

i'm crying so much right now because of the ending it's sooooooooooooooo fucking cute! loved the plot and everythign! WELL DONE!

Just read all of this! That ending was seriously cute and unexpected!! Loved it!!

@ Rev. Micki Plague

Aww thank you im glad you enjoyed it :-)

@ LastChance.
You are a great writer though because you got every detail in there :)

@ twejacobbr

I could never kill him off!

@ Rev. Micki Plague

Haha that song waa actually planned from the start

That was really really clever. It's like you wrote the entire story with those lyrics in mind, it fits perfectly. I love it :) Know what would be brilliant though? SEQUEL!!! :P

I knowww!! I was jumpingggup and down for that! Lol!!!!

@ twejacobbr

Haha thank you and I didn't kill him off!

AAAAAHHHH!! Tears in my eyes!!!! AMAAAAAAAAZING! Holyyy sh******t! Lol, wow. What i reaaallyy REAAAAALY enjoyed was the whole flashback thing, that i thought was an AWESOME touch! Bravooooo! Perfect PERFECTTTTTT ending!!!! I would recommend this story overrr andover if i could!!!! Fantastic!!

no i really liked the way everything tied together in the end, don't doubt yourself. you're a great writer! ☺

@ useyourtelescope
Oh my daisies thank you i am literally sat grinning bdcause you liked it. It means a lot you took the time to comment :)

@ collidewiththesky

Really? Ive literally just been sat panicking since ive posted worried that everyone would hate it!

I JUST DIED THE ENDING OMFG THE BIGGEST GRIN IS ON MY FACE AHHHHHHHHH

THIS WAS SO SWEET AND PERFECT AND I LOVE IT ☺ perfect ending :-)

Nooo! Greatly dislikeee this!!! Lol, ughghghg!

proud of her and i hope they make up next chapter! ☺