Unrequited - Comments

  • No way! A footloose story! My life is officially made, this is awesome. I so far, love everything you've got. You're layout is, perfection, describes the situation perfectly. & AH. This is amazing. I love the way Shiloh thinks and how it's progressed so far. Him living next door with his uncle, and it's all correct. Nicely written, darling. I will for sure stay up with this story, love it!

    There weren't any errors that I could find, either. Just in case you were wondering, which is great.

    I love it, update very soon♥♥
    June 22nd, 2013 at 01:33am
  • Love this! Can't wait to read more about Ren and Shiloh!
    March 28th, 2013 at 01:16am
  • I saw your blog and I did a little happy dance in my chair because I love Footloose. I'm so excited it see a fanfic about it.

    I plan to go back and read the prologue but you said you were iffy on the summary, so here are my two cents: the summary seems fine to me! I like how it has a little length (like book summaries) but it's not ridiculously long either. You did leave an apostrophe out in the first part of the written summary: until Rens mother packed up and left Bomont, Rens should be "Ren's"

    Past that, everything looks kosher and I am so excited to jump into the prologue. I may or may not have already opened it and been trying to skim it while writing this at the same time, haha. xox
    March 14th, 2013 at 05:53am
  • I love Footloose, so I can't wait to see where this story goes! The prologue was short, which is nice and it drew me in. Can't wait for the real first chapter. Crazy
    March 14th, 2013 at 01:15am