Through Another's Eyes - Comments

ban3795 (100)

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OH wow this story was AMAZING!!!! please please PLEASE write more, and elaborate :)

January 17th, 2014 at 09:39pm

deathXbeforeXdisco (100)

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Damn it.... I was so looking forwards to reading more :c
I absolutely loved this story! If you make it into something bigger at any stage let me know please!

June 21st, 2013 at 06:16pm

megpie12 (100)

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Wow! Can't wait for more! :D good job.

November 28th, 2012 at 04:30am

kitty.mewmew (100)

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In the prologue, somewhere in the beginning where you are explaining the argument, 'where they going to get money' should, I think, be 'were they'. The rest, I loved. The details were great, and I loved how you showed the personalities of all the characters=D

November 4th, 2012 at 06:28am