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  • thunder rain

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    @ xxlovexxisxxpain
    Thank you! I am slowly making my way through the next chapter as of a month ago :3 Maybe I can get something out over winter break. *crosses fingers*
    December 23rd, 2012 at 11:15pm
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    The story sounds really interesting! you should continue.
    December 23rd, 2012 at 07:21pm
  • Valiente

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    This isn't bad. There are only a few grammatical errors that I could find, but the plot is well thought out and the characters are well-rounded
    October 24th, 2012 at 03:18am
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