Phoebe - Comments

This was a lovely story. :]

wow!! Glad to see an update finally!! Very good ending to the story I might add. To me it seems that Phee, although smart in her own ways and persumed mature for her age, had some growing up to do (much like Scarlet) before she realized what all was going on in the world around her. You did a fantastic job doing just that. Can't wait to read your next story.

Ooh... Marvelous.

You know, even if he didn't rush to her and sweep her off her feet to dip and kiss her deeply like everyone was hoping [mainly because we all wish it could happen to us], I really loved this update.

oh wow....yet another great chapter in a great story I'm sad to see that it's almost at an end.

I need to get my butt in gear and continue working on my stuff :-p

Ah, Theodore... for some reason, I like him a lot.
Yeah for Phoebe update!

I loved loved loved that last line. LOVED IT.
I'm so glad you updated.
To be honest, though, I haven't even thought of working on Elizabeth since I took it down to rewrite. I was so excited about that story, and I probably will end up putting it back up but it might take a little longer. :]

Joey is being harsh, no?
I mean, to be put on the spot and with an anology.

We know he likes her, but he can't quite expect her, too.
He's jumping the gun a bit.

Yay! Update!!
I love how this story is unfolding. XD

Ah, I think I like where the new idea is going.
Ruin his relationship chances for the rest of highschool and have many people hating on him. Brilliant.

Down with Kevin!
I'm really glad you decided to update again. I really like this story.
Pure brilliance.

Aw, Joey must feel hurt or something because she didn't say anything to the effects of showing how much she likes him back. Poor thing.

I really need to update, don't I? I owe you at least.. four or five chapters.
BUT. I've got something really good coming. =O

Great update. I like Joey a lot.

Insert the dreamy, content sigh here and I have my review for this chapter.

Joey is so great.

L.O.V.E the end of chapter 15....so good. ^_^

keep it up! *thumbs up*

gems xx

Secret agents unite! Ha ha, I love the secrecy.

Loved the story. ^_^

You can really re-late to the people, and everything!

Keep it up. :D

*subscribes*

ooooohh

I only just found your story on mibba today. so I took an interest and started reading.
Boy oh boy. you have an amazing talent at wrtign. lOL

oops. pheobe is gunna get into trouble. tut tut tut.

brilliant story :)

Update soon :)

Mellzziii :)

Hah, I loved it. I looooooved it.
I really need to update, don't I? You've done like four updates...
I didn't really see anyhing wrong with any of it, so I think you're good.

Oh, whew. I saw you updated twice, and was like, ONOZ!! She updated! Where have I been?
But I'm alright now.
You're updates were good, like they usually are.
I'll try and work on that Elizabeth. update.
Or should I do Lacrymosa for you? :P

Awww...you are so cute! Thank you for welcoming me to mibba in your story! :) *sniffles* What an awesome friend! *sniff*
I really love this story. I like the reality-ness of it, you know? Like not one of those 'it could never happen' stories. Just the real deal.
Keep writing!