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  • folk you please

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    XD yay!! Now, I must go update.
    May 14th, 2008 at 12:21am
  • Whoaishly Lame

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    Yeah! This chapter made me happy.
    May 13th, 2008 at 03:29am
  • Whoaishly Lame

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    I love nerds. Well nerds with the more bed-head dorky/spaz way instead of the clean and organized ones.
    May 7th, 2008 at 02:59am
  • folk you please

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    Yay. An update... finally. Hah. I love how you referenced to Edward. I love him... :]

    Mm, yeah, actually I think you owe me two, but I'm over it. I left you that message and then updated, so I'll let you catch up. I've got a bit of writer's block, so.. yeah. But I DO have the whole story planned out. It'll be good.
    May 6th, 2008 at 01:39am
  • thekoby

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    Fantastic!! Just finished chapter 7 and loved how you developed the character more. I'm used to reading paragraphs about someone's past or how they eat their food....but a list, then comparison...brilliant! I might have to steal that idea ;-)
    May 5th, 2008 at 09:21pm
  • folk you please

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    I love how you have me in your author notes. It makes me feel uber special.
    I'm gonna go work on that update now. :)
    April 28th, 2008 at 04:21am
  • taylorthestrange;

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    I like this!
    April 27th, 2008 at 11:05pm
  • folk you please

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    :arms: :cute:
    Aww, shucks.
    Anyway, great update.
    April 25th, 2008 at 01:12am
  • folk you please

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    I would say something super smart and sound like I'm an expert at these, but I'm not.

    Update soon.
    April 24th, 2008 at 12:12am
  • folk you please

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    Ivy was hilarious. She just seemed so ... so much like every girl. I don't know ... would that be a bad thing? I liked the update, though.
    April 21st, 2008 at 11:33pm
  • folk you please

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    This is fantastic. The way you're describing things is just like every day life. I can't wait to see what this unfolds into.

    And by the way, I really, really like Phoebe. She seems so normal, but I know that somehow she's not. Update soon!
    April 20th, 2008 at 06:48pm
  • jelody mensen

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    I love how you write. Makes it so much easier to read. I love semi-colons, they make my world go round!
    April 16th, 2008 at 08:08am
  • nerdy_

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    Yeah, first comment! Oh wait....I'm the author. Never mind then *ruffles feathers*.
    April 16th, 2008 at 04:04am