Holy fucking shitakimushrooms. That's just ... Shit. Why the fuck are you making Jimmy the bad guy!? WHY. MOTHER FUCKER. Anywhore. I love it, just like the other stories. ._. <3
This seems really promising. I hope Jimmy doesn't try to take Matt or anything though. Ha, that made me think Jimmy be nice to your newborn! I hope you complete this.
Oh wow, this looks really good I like all the ideas lay out, and the questions I have already. You have great potential as a writer there was like one mistake and I think it was a typo and the plot sounds really good :) Please update again soon and forget about silent readers and subs, you always get them it doesn't mean they don't adore the story :)
Not letting you stop. If you stop, I'll kill you. & stop asking me why on Skype, god dammit. I'll keep saying 'cause. But I do like it. .___. don't stop it.
Jimmy's not there, Brian's not there... & of course, the blood out of nowhere has just fuckin' vanished... ._. chapter four soon. if you give up on this, I'll kick your ass. c: <3
o3o; I'm on Skype with you right now & you're forcing me to write you a comment. >_> anywhore. Brian is just... unf. ;-; demon Brian & then Matt getting into town.. gah. ;___; don't you dare stop writing this one. >_>