23 - Comments

@ SevenfoldGirl_
the cliffhanger has definitely served its purpose then!!!!!!!!!!! yay!!!!!

FUCKING CLIFFHANGER I TELL YOU. e.e Haha that was so mean but now I'm even more excited about 24! :D

Great job! Cant wait to read the sequel and I hope to see Shadows and Izzy get back together:)

@ amodernmyth88
you really took that whole feedback thing seriously!!! you're comments always have me in stitches!! i'm thrilled that you enjoyed this story!!!! i'm working on chapter 3 of 24 and when i tell you it's coming along great..it totally iis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love how every comment you kept wanting to kill Vengeance!!!!! it was hilarious!! and there is more short shit as per your request...hahahahahahah......
much love

gah omg it's the frickin end of the wooooorld!!! ahhhh!! (eheheheheh okay i'm done)
seriously though I LOVED EVERY WORD OF THIS STORY!! and i've kinda wanted to kick vengeance ass all through it, just love that you've had this one character that just wouldn't be lovey-dovey

and the b-day, damn it started off so good with jimbo being the nutter that he is..-totally adorable at that..
christ being just cute..
shadows finally realizing that syn's got a thing for izzy as well and that he felt like his flowers was nothing compared to brians just totally amazing necklace and telling her mom what she would want as a present..

the rose from V.. pssh i don't buy that shit-load-of-crap he wrote on it..!! hahahahah

dana and jimmy <3
annie and christ <3

ooh grinding on the dancefloor with shadz and then the whole thing with V, a little taste of his own medicine

and night!! damn i almost forgot that they didn't kill him.. hahaha.. and others will want her?? HOLY SHIT BALLS!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL.. <3

Ooh Zacky really is an evil little turd isn't he? I love how he's so ignorant to his own feelings though - he loves her just as much as the others but is too scared to admit it.

Oh my god Jimmy and the grass people was hilarious. I think my colleague in the next office is wondering what I was sniggering at :-)

nice little twist there! it makes the anticipation even more exiting!! i want to know who she will end up with
xx

just a slap? damn the donkey-butt needs a fist in his face!! he's one sick bastard O_o

jimmy.. frickin hell he is so funny i'm dying over here <3 grass people..!! but talk about ruining the moment jimbo!! couldn't he just let Bri and Izzy lay there <3 it was so darn cute!!

shadows.. stupid stupid man!! now that was one bad talk!! hahahahah trying to justify slaves, yeah- no!

christ.. heheheheheheheheheh he's just so cute the little gnome.. always picked on <3

aaawh ya know out of 3 dudes, Bri was the one that didn't say something dumb to Izzy while she made lasagna i just love him <3 he's awesome

Can't wait to see what'll happen in the last chapter of this part of the story..
and i kinda wanna kill vengeance now

@ SevenfoldGirl_ friggin Vengeance is such a little snot.....i had a lot of fun writing this and i had to find the right way to say what i wanted to say about Vengeance....guess it worked! i yay SEQUEL!!!!!!

oh my god. The end of this chapter just tied it all together. So goood omg. I loved the enitre chapter but the last sentence was disgustingly good (in a good way? ;D) hehe, and the sequeel omg :D 24444444

no Vengence no, don't even think about it!!! Loved the new chapter update soon!! :)

Wow, this chapter was soo good. My eyes were completely stuck to every word on the screen (not at the same time) xD You could imagine the pain Jimmy felt off seeing Izzy in that state.. urhg. And then the kiss Matt and her shared, getting interrupted by Brian. oh you could sense the tension :O Then when the realisation of Brian loving her and Jimmy confirming it. Oh I sense drama :D

aww i feel for Brian, this chapter brought a little tear to my eye, Brian having to see Izzy and mat reconcile, and right at the end when she realizes that he is in love with her, i love how you have sneakily built up to it as well, love it!! gutted about it coming to an end but exited for the chapters to come and the sequel!! xx

I love this story, I hope she chooses Brian because he seems so in love with her, please update soon!

23 will end at chapter 20..so brace yourselves.. woah that ALMOST killed me!! but sequel!! YAY!! <3

awh that bath sounded like hell O_o but needed.. wooh Jimmy telling Shadows off was so awesome

hmm.. poor Brian had to see Shadows and Izzy kissing and now she knows... i wonder what she'll do?? give shadows another chance or Brian?? maybe none of them?? who knows maybe she'll just take Johnny?? hahahahah

Great update! Cant wait to read the end and the sequel that will follow

You know things are getting bad when Jimmy is the voice of reason. It was very good idea to get Shadows out of the bathroom as he probably would have bitch slapped Annie into next week. Not that I could blame him - she is a whiny little bitch lol

Thank god that Izzy is on the mend, and Shadows showed her his caring side. I feel sorry for Brian but he shouldn't take his moods out on Izzy. It's not her fault that she doesn't return his feelings.

Will be interesting to see how Zacky reacts to Izzy being hurt - will he still not care or will he show that deep down his cares about her as much as the rest of the guys?

OH FUCK ME SIDEWAYS AND HAND ME TO MAMA!!!
the sick fuck actually branded her after whipping.. damn!!! the things i wanna do to that bastard.. pulling out his nails one by one.. and his teeth.. well yeah let's just say it ain't pretty in my head.. moahahahahah

well mr.gontier, thank you!!!!!! he deserves a hug
wiiieee Brian is going to be okay *happy dance*
Shadows.. cried.. *sniffs* aawhs!! ya know.. Izzy, even though she just went through hell, needs to just bitch-slap him if he keeps sulking and thinking that he failed her, Night just outsmarted them a few times, shit happens!! hahahahah LOVELOVELOVELOVE this story <3

oh my god this was just so terrifying for Izzy. Night really needs to die and slow and extremely painful death. Can I do it, can I do it?????

I can't believe the sick son of a bitch branded her :-(

Shadows is going to cut himself up so bad as he thinks he failed her. Thank god that Gontier sided with Shadows and got her out of there before he could do anything else to her.

@ shadyshadz
its an honor that you feel that way about this story :)