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  • wabadabadaba

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    Perfect, just absolutely perfect yet again. I love when Ava leaned against Zayn and he was all smug because of the vet. You write so well and I just really love this.
    January 13th, 2013 at 03:49am
  • sweet insanity

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    Zayn' being nice!!!!! Yes finally the shell starts to crack :D oh I love her friend she's amazing ;) can't believe you don't get a lot of comments! This is one of my favorite stories! Update soon babe! <3
    January 13th, 2013 at 03:48am
  • luckyluchiane

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    You don't know how bad I wish this Zayn would throw me against the nearest flat stable surface and have his way with me lol, keep it up this story is awesome!!!!
    January 13th, 2013 at 03:48am
  • halcyondays

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    I can't believe you don't get many comments! This story is incredible! I love the story line!
    January 13th, 2013 at 02:51am
  • alyssa-anne

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    “I can’t believe you hit a dog with your car you dick,” the woman stated. HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAH I AM FUCKING CRYING OH MY GOD.
    January 13th, 2013 at 02:39am
  • Xrosepetalx

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    Are you gonna post tomorrow? Its his birthday!:)
    January 12th, 2013 at 05:03am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Love this chapter.
    January 5th, 2013 at 04:20pm
  • Emmy2550

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    Awhhhhh! LOVE OVER A DEAD DOG! How romaaaaantic!!!! Haha! I i loved this!
    January 3rd, 2013 at 01:53am
  • heyrayray

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    YAY!
    also, @pineapple55, hahahaha!
    January 2nd, 2013 at 08:29pm
  • pineapple55

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    Okay so now either Ava or Zayn will adopt the dog and he will bring them together, right?! RIGHT?! (sorry I just got a little excited there). love it like usual girl, keep up the good work!
    January 2nd, 2013 at 05:56pm
  • alyssa-anne

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    you hit a dog with your car you bitch. remember that time we were driving behind that car that hit a squirrel? AWFUL.
    January 2nd, 2013 at 11:43am
  • Xrosepetalx

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    This was a great chapter! Hope you update sooonn!
    December 29th, 2012 at 08:52am
  • kmunn50

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    PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS IS AMAZING! I don't think I've ever read one like this! You're an amazing writer!
    December 24th, 2012 at 09:54pm
  • Emmy2550

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    Yepp! At this rate, they're gunna get married! :) lol
    December 24th, 2012 at 06:03am
  • luckyluchiane

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    All I have to say is Zayn in the shower sounds heavenly, and hurry up and update!!!!
    December 21st, 2012 at 06:35am
  • misscourtney1994

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    This has to be my favorite story. I absolutely love they way you write and I hope you continue. (:
    December 21st, 2012 at 05:04am
  • pineapple55

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    a little tension there! glad Ava put that little dig in there. i was surprised at first by Zayn's bitch comment but he was taken aback, so it makes sense. enjoyed it as always!
    December 21st, 2012 at 05:02am
  • heyrayray

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    ugh! update more often! <3
    December 21st, 2012 at 05:02am
  • wabadabadaba

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    I don't think I can ever properly express how much I actually love this story. It's incredible and I love Ava and I love Zayn and I love the way they interact. I can't wait until the next update.
    December 21st, 2012 at 04:17am
  • Xrosepetalx

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    Okay this fanfic is actually kind of perfect please keep writting!:)
    December 11th, 2012 at 07:25am
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