Salvation - Comments

I actually read this story rather than skim it. I tend to "read" everything by skimming So far it looks like you're doing a good job with the PTSD factors. I live with someone who has it a bit more severe, but it sounds around right the way you characterize Zayn. I find it hard to find stories that have a balance between telling and showing, and I’m happy to say that you're doing an amazing job. I'm sorry that you haven't gotten as much feedback as you'd like, but please don't give up. This has so much potential. It’s mind blowing that this is only the third chapter and I’m all ready all for this story. Keep up the good work

never apologize for a long chapter! I feel like you're going really in depth with the feelings, which is enjoyable to read. I'm hoping some background characters will be introduced soon. Love it so far though! :)

I love this. It's totally different than the typical Zayn story posted on here. It has a nice story line which I like. It's done by and amazing author which makes reading so much better. I can not wait for another update.

Love this

so good! keep going :)

I love how your so good at explaining how they feel and what they are thinking. Cant wait for more!

i am so glad i found this story. it's beyond original and just extremely well written. i can't get the idea of how real this situation is. i adore that it's not some boy meets girl they fall in love but he goes on an world tour blah blah happily ever after shit the stories with them usually portray.(although i enjoy reading those too lol ) i just love how fresh this is. i'm repeating myself but goodness i am just in love with your story. i cannot wait for the next chapter, i already know its going to be great. update soon! xx

I love this story more and more with every new chapter.
I would be so bummed out if you stopped writing this so please don't ever stop, it's so great.
I loved loved loved this chapter and how Zayn really didn't want to help Ava but of course he did because he can't help it and Ava drove him home. Sigh. Lovely update.

I love this! Cant get enough!

It was nice to get some backstory there. It seems realistic, and I'm happy to see it's set in Chicago. I'm excited for more Zayn-Ava action! :)

Oooh. This is different. The first sentence in chapter one hooked me. I didn't even have to read the whole chapter to know I was going to subscribe to this. I have no idea where this is going to go, but I like it. Continue the good work!

Oh this is so good. I loved learning about how Ava was attracted to help Zayn and how she realized it was reckless but she wanted to keep him away from the other people's eyes. And I loved hearing about Zayn's background as well and what he imagined going home like but it didn't end up that way. Anyway, I love this and I hope you update soon.

um this is awesome and I am so intrigued. Ava is fiery and I love that! Looking forward to seeing where you take this!

This is soo cool and unique! I cant wait for more! Im so psyched to see what happens!

I think that this is great so far. Definitely can't wait for more chapters to come out. It's written very well and a great story line too! Update it soon!

Aimee this is so fucking good, get the fuck out of here!! For probably the first time in forever, I didn't get any snippets of this before you posted so I'm just like fangirling over it okay. Your descriptions were perfect and so fucking good. I JUST CAN'T OKAY. This is legit probably the best thing you've ever written, seriously. THIS COMMENT IS SO STUPID. Basically I love everything about this from your descriptions to the tone to angry Zayn being so vulnerable and realistic. PLS.

agree with the comment before me the only word that sums it up is WOW this is a complete new plot and its really really god please update soonnn

Okay I really fucking love this. (I'm sorry for the language?) It's just wow. I love AU Zayn/One Direction and this is great and Zayn is perfect and the thought of him as a soldier is just..yeah amazing. And the girl was so sweet and I love how she stood up for herself and oh my god I'm already in love with this story.