Things They Don't See - Comments

I love it!!!! you should update soon!:)

well, it's no wonder she starts thinking about Elli this way. At least that's what I think.
And it's great that she had such a good day at the spa. She certainly deserved it.

And I'm sorry that I only saw this now...

Sammy needs a slap in the face, maybe even break his nose while you're at it. IT's well desevred.
On another note... ELI AND ABBY ARE SO CUTE! The way she tells him all about hockey and the team, and how he react to her. It's perfect

"Because my soul still exists."
That gave me chills. As did the rest of the last chapter. Your descriptions are really wonderful

OMG it's so cute how he starts stuttering! That makes me like him even more. I like all her worrying somehow. I can't evenr eally tell you, why, I just do

I really love getting to know more about her past. And it's soo good, that she talks to Annie about her feelings and what she thought about her. Especially Annie's story was interesting. I'm glad they are closer now AND ELI!! YAY

At least she now knows who this guy is and I am loving it. It's so well written and the way Abby reacts... It's amazing that they staff there handle it like it's so natural. I mean, to them it is, but to everyone else it isn't. wow.

OH MY GOD
I am ashamed that I haven't read this sooner, because it is brilliant. YOu already captured me with the summary and now after reading the two chapters i'm completely baffled. This idea is simply birlliant and so beautifully executed, I'm proud of you Donna and I can't wait for a new chapter now that I've started

i love this :)