Somewhere in Neverland - Comments

I got this story in the comment swap :) I was finally able to finish ready this! I don't recall reading anything wrong with it at all :D I am most definitely going to recommend this story. I loved all of it :) Keep up the awesome work.

okay so i don't remember subscribing to this but i'm glad i did

You should post this story on Wattpad

I got this through comment swap.

I have never read any sort of ATL fiction, so I have no clue about the proper characterization or personalities of the real people in the story. Unfortunately, I can't let you know if you really captured who they are. That being said, I'm impressed with your story - the characters develop so well, and your writing has this tone to it that makes it feel so personal.

A lot of writers stick to only describing scenes and actions, rather than letting the reader know what the characters are thinking and feeling. That's just as important as the scenery, or if a character nods or what have you.

It's like this is an actual account of someone's experiences, and the reader can connect with it on a much more personal level. That's why stories like this one are memorable.

*Comment Swap*

I started reading this...then finals came up and I became super busy and couldn't finish it. It was really good...and I want to finish it. I don't remember anything wrong with it, it seemed to have a very good storyline, and I hope the ending is as good as the beginning and middle. I think I got to chapter 23 or so. Keep up the good work.

AMAZING

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I'm pretty sure I've read your story before. I might have, it sounds really familiar. Anyway, I really enjoyed this. I love All Time Low as a band but never really got into reading fan fics about them.

Leaving isn’t something I’m new to. I’ve left everything that’s ever come close to resembling home, so this shouldn’t hurt so much, but there's a lump in the back of my throat and my body tingles in numbness.
I can relate to Caroline so much with this line. I've had to move plenty of times due to my mom's job and you'd think someone would be used to it, but when you get attached to someone, it's really hard to say goodbye.

I plan on recommending and subscribing to this. I've only read the prologue and the first chapter, but this is just too good to pass up. Carolina is such a great character and I love her personality. I also like how you have the parents in the story, many people just put them off to the side and they're just...there.

You've done such a fabulous job. ♥

Your writing style is so witty and easy to read, and from the getgo, Caroline was an interesting character. Also I really gotta commend you for developing the parents – I don’t see that very often in stories on here; the parents are normally just sort of there without much of a personality.
And omgomgomg Riley’s Arrow – did you write that? :O I tried Googling it and nothing came up. I love it when bands in stories write their own music – too often, authors just steal from other bands, haha. And good Lord, I can’t wait to read more. You introduced all the characters beautifully, not overwhelming the reader with information, and I can already tell that all of them are different and unique.
I’ve only had time to read the first two chapters but I’m definitely coming back to this. Arg, I can’t wait!

Oh my god! i almost teared up when she was leaving. They are way too cute! more soon please, i'm in love with this story

They need to have a girl, and then alex could be a super cute dad that spoils his little girl rotten

Hi! So I just found this story today and its crazy good :)

I just got to chapter 18 where it mentions Luke and his twin. I noticed that you use the twins pictures for Luke's brothers (21 and 16) instead of Phinn and Luke. I don't know if that was intentional or accidental, I just noticed it and decided to point it out.

This story is amazing by the way. I love the characters. Can't wait to finish it, yet I don't want it to end. :D

Man that was a Long comment!

Omg this is currently my most favorite fan fiction ever. EVER. You're a really good writer :) I hope the pregnancy goes well and they have a boy :) Alex would look insanely adorable with a little girl, but I've never come across a story where Alex (or any other member) had a baby boy instead of a girl so it'd be cool to see that change for once :) and I know its kinda crazy but I'm not exactly asking or telling you too, but it'd be really cool if you wrote a Zack Merrick Fanfic! Cause wow your my favorite writer on here right now and there are very few Zack fanfic (unfortunately) I don't know how cause he's absolutely precious but he doesn't and you're such a great writer and yea, so that'd be really cool :) but you don't have to obviously lol :) so yea cant wait for the next chapter and the sequel I'm in love with this.!!! <33

love it!

aw it's ok :), this chapter was so cute, thanks for updating!

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Oh god, I know how Carolina feels so much. I've been jerked around due to my dad's job so many times, it's depressing. I'm not a huge fan of fanfics but I love All Time Low. I love your descriptions and how vivid your imagery it. I plan on subscribing and I've already recommended it. I'm already hooked and I've only read the first two chapters!

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Oh god, I know how Caroline feels so much. I've been jerked around due to my dad's job so many times, it's depressing. I'm not a huge fan of fanfics but I love All Time Low. I love your descriptions and how vivid your imagery it. I plan on subscribing and I've already recommended it. I'm already hooked and I've only read the first two chapters!

awh I ove this story more than I can describe! so that 'hopefully a sequel' better become a sequel, I don't think I can handle not having Caroline and Alex in my life! haha!

aw, hope everything works out between them, love this!

oh boy! they really do have a lot to talk about! I can't wait for the next chapter and see what is going to happen! Thanks for the shout out as well, you didn't have to do that haha. You're too nice :)