Somewhere in Neverland - Comments

Leaves me wanting more!

I really love the way you write! Can't wait for the next update :D

Comment swap!:)
I've never really been into All Time Low but wow the way you write is brilliant!I feel like I'm there.Especially with how intense this last chapter was.I'm on Alex's side without a doubt here.However I do adore how Alex was Caroline's young love.
Keep up the good work!:)

Holy intensity! Really liked this chapter, it's very well written and I know it can be hard as fuck to write arguments, but this was amazing :)

That was intense and I am totally on Alex's side with this one. Great update as always.

Your descriptions are wonderful and I'm only on the 3rd paragraph of the prologue, I wan't expecting to love it as it's fan fiction, but my god I'm already wanting to read more. Ahhhh, this is brilliant. <3

In all places to find the most grammatically correct, and intellectual use of words a 'band fiction' would be the last place that one would think it would be used in. I love the story lots of cute moments and expressed very well. Stephan's and Caroline's relationship is very cute, and I love how they made art together in the sixteenth chapter. GOOD JOB <3

Comment swap sent me here! :)

I don't know anything about the person the band you're writing about, but the prologue is fantastic. It's neatly written and flows well and I like the insight you provide with that. The next chapter, the way you go into it, confuses me a little, but I catch up easily, so it's not big deal.And then you introduce the cute bit about Alex being her young love. C: That's so endearing and I love it!

This doesn't seem to be a sappy love story and, as I'm not really found of those, that fact makes me like this even more.

I don't really have any criticism because this is really good. So good luck with it!

Comment Swap
I'll be honest, I don't like band fictions at all. I think I see way too many of them, but Comment Swap brought me here so I will be more than glad to read this and see how you're doing c:

The prologue is really interesting. I kind of forgot that it was a fan fiction in the first place because it was so vivid and realistic that I actually lost myself in it. I could almost see myself in this person's position and you have respect points as a writer from me c: GOOD LUCK

I like the introduction, and how you give us the details of the backstory without overloading the reader. The jump in time in the next chapter is smooth, and flows well. And the interactions between the characters is really good, and seems very realistic, very much like real friendships.

Now, it's my turn to give you a comment for comment swap =D I don't read a lot of fanfic anymore, and I don't listen to a lot of All Time Low, but I didn't need to for the prologue. I really enjoy your descriptions, and how she described her Dad. I liked being able to sense the tension between the two of them, while still being able to tell that she obviously cares for her Dad. Good job, and keep updating!

Comment swap here. This seems interesting. Even though I don't usually read stuff like this, but you've changed my mind. :) I love the title, the summary drew me in, and the OC seems original enough for me. :) I think there are a lot of stories like this, but I like this one. I think that this can go a long way. Even though I've only read the first couple of chapters, I think it'll be a good story. :) Keep up with the great work and make your readers happy. :) because I can see this story has great potential. <3

Hello there. Xd I was brought here to this story of yours by comment swap. I have to say I prefer original stories than fan fics but I did read this judging it as if it was original. The only thing I didn't like was the summary. Seriously it didn't pull me in at all. It made me not want to read but I did and saw that your chapters are written really nicely, so in my opinion make the summary more interesting. That's all. Keep up the great work and share your imagination with all of us. Xd

Hello there. Xd I was brought here to this story of yours by comment swap. I have to say I prefer original stories than fan fics but I did read this judging it as if it was original. The only thing I didn't like was the summary. Seriously it didn't pull me in at all. It made me not want to read but I did and saw that your chapters are written really nicely, so in my opinion make the summary more interesting. That's all. Keep up the great work and share your imagination with all of us. Xd

Hi!
New to this story and just read all the chapters so far! LOVE IT!!! cannot wait for the next part!

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haha that convo at the end was great! Great updates!

so i just found this story and i really like it so far granted im only a few chapters in. but random question whats the font that you use in the banner? i really like it :)

I love this story. It's so well written. :) Happy birthday!!!

Happy Birthday! :-)
and i love this story!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!