Lazy Jane - Comments

This story is really really amazing and I honestly enjoy Ethan. I don't really hate him because he actually has character! He has layers that I look forward to watching you unveil. This is a badass prologue and your writing is flawless!!!! Please update ASAP!

You only have one chapter, the prologue, up so far, but so far I like it a lot! I'm interested to see where this will go.

The summary really drew me in. I like the way it was set up like that rather than like most summaries, just a couple paragraphs telling about the story. I think it still gave an idea as to what the story is about but was so much more interesting! I also enjoy the layout.

Your writing style is great and I can't wait to read more. I hope that you continue with the story.

This was perfect for a prologue. It short and blunt and rough and utterly beautiful; the way you wrote it, your flow, completed it. I loved how your summary drew me in. I tend to look at them before diving right into the story and if they aren't any good, just brush the story off. Your summary had me itching to read the prologue and now your prologue has me itching to read more, so I do hope you continue with this.

Like the commenter below me, I too thought of the poem by Shel Silverstein but I doubt it'll be much like that.

I haven't even read it this yet and I love it.
I saw the name because a friend recced it, and I thought of the poem by Shel Silverstein!
Sure enough, it's the summary! :D
I can't wait to read!

This is interesting

HOLY HELL.
Please tell me that you have more to post hereafter. This is a BEAUTIFUL story, even just for the intro. It definitely draws the reader in because right now I'm completely hooked. I don't know what else to say. That prologue was like a kick in the face and I loved it. Absolutely loved it.

In case you can't tell I'm a little bit speechless.
I just want more.

You write like a goddess.

**This is an extremely delayed reply to you from my blog where I gave out free story comments (posted about a week ago).

i like it! i'd love to read more

I randomly clicked on this story and I am glad I did. It is still just starting out but I love your writing style, it is very poetic. Keep it up! I already want to read more!!