~Comment Swap~ I really like this story so far! It's cute and sweet and I love all of your descriptions :) Alice's character seems really nice and I can relate to her.. And Jace is so cute! Standing up to defend her honour! Aww :')
There's just one thing that bothers me, only a small thing, but still.. When you write about Alice's thoughts, you seem to change from the past tense into the present tense? If you changed that I think it would help the story flow more smoothly and it would also be easier to understand.
Other than that, I really like this story and I can't wait to see the next installation :') PS. Love the layout!
I really like this story so far! It's cute and sweet and I love all of your descriptions :)
Alice's character seems really nice and I can relate to her.. And Jace is so cute! Standing up to defend her honour! Aww :')
There's just one thing that bothers me, only a small thing, but still.. When you write about Alice's thoughts, you seem to change from the past tense into the present tense? If you changed that I think it would help the story flow more smoothly and it would also be easier to understand.
Other than that, I really like this story and I can't wait to see the next installation :')
PS. Love the layout!