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  • iheartzackyvengeance

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    Brian better shape up so he can find out from Matt where Ashlyn is. They should be together and he should know his son! Matt is such a smart cookie for figuring it out.
    January 24th, 2013 at 04:28am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Matt's found Ashley...I wonder if he can convince her to talk to Brian or at least let him know he has a son...I mean Brian is a total mess right now. Matt's right if Brian wants to see her again..he needs to straighten himself out.
    Great update :)
    January 23rd, 2013 at 11:15pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    Matt's found Ashley...I wonder if he can convince her to talk to Brian or at least let him know he has a son...I mean Brian is a total mess right now. Matt's right if Brian wants to see her again..he needs to straighten himself out.
    Great update :)
    January 23rd, 2013 at 11:15pm
  • AJ9

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    Sounds like Matt's right. If Brian wants to get Ashley back he needs to get himself together and show her that he can at least keep himself sober!

    Please update again soon x
    January 23rd, 2013 at 09:42pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Wow, poor Brian but Matt's right Brian needs to fix his ways and get his priorities straighten out and stop sleeping around and partying like a damn man whore, Matt is goin to meet James this is goin to be good and is Matt goin to tell Brian, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    January 23rd, 2013 at 07:48pm
  • HanerJoy

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    ohhhhhh this is gonna be interesting, very interestig :D I hope Matt tells Brian he has a so, he needs to know :) Poor Brian :( But if he hasn't look for her is his problem he's like that. Update soon!!!
    January 23rd, 2013 at 04:25pm
  • ofmiceanda7x

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    I had to control the excited squeal that tried to escape my mouth at the end of this chapter. Omg. I wonder how Matt will react.
    January 23rd, 2013 at 02:31pm
  • a0000

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    I swear women every time i read the new chapters you suck me in even more!!!! This one was really good. I dont know if i mentioned it before but your style of writing is good, really good. I havent read very many stories on here where the gammar and spelling are so correct and the way you cut the parts helps the story flow really well.
    January 23rd, 2013 at 02:00pm
  • Tpets

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    Please ma'm can I have some more?
    WHO UNDERSTOOD THAT REFERENCE?
    January 22nd, 2013 at 01:00am
  • cocomemoco

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    please update soon i love your stories
    January 21st, 2013 at 09:10pm
  • EverMonroe

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    Oh, and Caprina is right!
    January 9th, 2013 at 07:11am
  • EverMonroe

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    O.O please please update im dying here!!!!
    January 9th, 2013 at 07:10am
  • iheartzackyvengeance

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    Please tell me Brian is on the other line!!!!! They really need to get back together. And she needs to tell James about his dad, he has a right to know.
    January 9th, 2013 at 04:29am
  • ofmiceanda7x

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    It has to be either Matt or Brian on the phone and I really hope its Brian! I think Ashlyn should at least tell James who his father is. He has a right to know.
    January 9th, 2013 at 02:01am
  • XtremeFairy

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    I bet it's Brian on the phone. I think that Caprina is right..James has a right to know how he's father is and so does Brian. I bet he would be so happy to find out he has a son :D
    Great update
    January 8th, 2013 at 09:37pm
  • AJ9

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    It's brian on the phone and I think she should speak to him. I love the name venus rose. It's beautiful. Please update soon x
    January 8th, 2013 at 02:25pm
  • foREVerTegan:D

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    I feel sorry for Ashlyn but she should really talk to Brian and we all know who is on the phone ;)
    January 8th, 2013 at 07:02am
  • a0000

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    Omg!!!! Please tell me Brian is back in the picture?! Im so excited to read the next one :) i think i might be a bit of a fanatic of this series mow haha
    January 8th, 2013 at 06:54am
  • MoMo_92

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    I think that Caprina is 100000% right Ashyln needs to tell James who his father is and tell Brian tht he has a son, I like Jayden he looks like he can make Ashlyn happy but I have this strange feeling tht once he gets her whenever tht is he is goin to do a complete 180 and be the bad guy u kno there is always got to be a bad guy in a love story just sayin.....I think it's either Matt or Brian becuz Roxy like call anyone an asshole if they r buggin her or trying to take the phone away form her so yea and umm mrs. Abbey yeah ur a bitter bitch can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    January 8th, 2013 at 06:42am
  • HanerJoy

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    I hope is Brian in the phone :) but I think is Matt lol and I think Caprina is 100% right :) James need to know about his father and she needs to talk to Brian. Jayden well nehhhh is caring and all that but she looks better with the love of her life that is Brian and I thin the principal is in love with him and jealous of Ashlyn because he wants to be with her. Update soon!!!!
    January 8th, 2013 at 06:31am