The Good Ones Go - Comments

I just finished reading this and am SO sad that there is no ending. I didn’t realize that before I got hooked. I saw the last update was from 2019. Any chance on writing an ending for 2021? I just NEED Chelsea and Travis to end up together.

@ sunshinexx
I mean I'm totally okay with that cause I am sooooo Obsessed.

I'm really dragging it out lol

No no no! No dates with Charles lol. Only Travis!!! :p

Ughhhh I’m soooo obsessed!! I’m glad she is working her shit out no matter how pissed I was when she just up and left with Colson.

I can't give away all my secrets ;) but I'm glad you're still enjoying it!

I'm so in love with this story!!!! Not sure how I feel about her going back to Colson yet. I guess the jury is still out lol :)

Awee poor Adam! As much as I didn't want her to end up with him he clearly cared about her. Ughh can't wait to see how things unfold for her.

Great update!! and thank you for the info, I can't wait to see how it is resolved. I will keep my fingers crossed for Travis but I understand if that's not how you end it. Gotta stay true to the vision you have for it.

@GalaxyDefend3r
No spoilers, but I think you'll be happy to know the Adam situation will be resolved soon. I think it's going to get dramatic and angsty pretty fast lol. Thanks for your comments, and for reading!

Hope you guys are still enjoying. I have the next 5 chapters vaguely outlined, so I will continue to update weekly. I think we have at least another 8-10 chapters to go before this ends, but I'm still developing this as we go.

I'll take any suggestions/requests you guys have.

As always, thanks for reading!!

Great as always!! I know Adam is a great guy and all but for some reason. I just can’t see her with him. I honestly thought she was gonna leave him at the altar. Anywho can’t wait for more

Glad to hear from you :) I am working on the next chapter, and it should be up in a few hours.

I honestly want her to be with Travis. As much as she loves MGK there is a reason that she always came back to Travis. He's her solace.

Guys pleeeease tell me: MGK or Travis?

I'm trying to write, but I don't know which way to take the plot!!!!

Please update soon!!! I need to know what happens omg!

I love this story. Update soon please?? xx

I'm sitting here, trying to think of the perfect way to start out this comment, so I guess I can start with this: I'm still trying to figure out why she would stick with someone that she doesn't truly love and end up marrying him. I'm just in utter shock because that particular situation, in a few ways, mirrored her situation, and I couldn't even bring myself to do that (If you're curious, feel free to PM me. This was obviously a very vague description of my personal situation.).
ANYWAY, storyline is pretty good. I was hooked from when I started reading, and that's an accomplishment because I have the worst attention span. Chelsea, a part of the way through, started to annoy me. I really thought that she was going to turn into a Mary Jane/Jane Doe where she was absolutely perfect with no flaw to her, but that slowly, but surely, changed with time and delving deeper into the story.
I think the only thing I would suggest would be to use more imagery and describe the settings and people. I just found an overall lack of detail, and that might just be me as a writer, since I detail just about everything. Aha.

This comment sounds like I was rewarding you for an entry to a writing contest. I just had a lot on my mind the entire time I read this, and I thoroughly enjoyed. Definitely recommending and subscribing. Update soon. xx

PLEASE UPDATE :)

Sorry that updates have been lacking. Love you guys for sticking through the tough times with me <3.