Love Endlessly - Comments

Wow, this was really good.
Excellent, actually.
I really, really, REALLY LOVED it!
Great work on it! =D

This was, wow, one of the sweetest things I've ever read. So beautiful, and gorgeous, and perfect, and everything else in the thesaurus that relates to beauty. You really captured the emotion. It's melancholic and bittersweet and touching and something to bring a smile on reader's face with. Amazing.

That... was... amazing. I loved this. I read for context (not spelling or grammer) so all I know is how the actually "story" was and I thought it was just incredible, Great job, your a good writer. (btw, Comment Swap brought me here) I love this!

that was nice, i would be interested to either see this as more of a free verse poem, more reflection on visceral images and sensory information, or as a traditional sort story, more charecter back stories and exposition, but this is still a fine piece the way it is. a nit picky criticism altough and though don't mean exactly the same thing, i'm not sure which word you actually wanted, but i would chose "though".

I was brought here from Comment Swap (:

This made me cry. This is so beautiful. It was one of the easiest things to understand, and I didn't find any spelling or grammatical issues. This piece is phenomenal. It really is. I hope to see more things like this. It's really amazing. <3 (:

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This is very beautiful. Form the writing itself to the layout. To me it was very romantic and realistic and I can tell that you put a lot of though into it. There were no spelling or grammar mistakes and it was very easy to read. This was nice, sweet, and just so lovely, there really isn't anything to criticize with this story, so great job!

*long sigh* I'm from comment swap, and I'm so glad I found this peice. Sometimes its really hard to find beautiful stories and stuff through comment swap. I'm in awe of this piece, it's so easy to read, realistic, romantic, perfect without any spelling or gramar. You are an amazing writer, these words stick by me especially the last line, it's so relevent todays issues in a person. Amazing.

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This is amazing and realistic I love it. You have made seem so real and its brilliant. It isnt over exageratied. I think this is absolutly perfect with no grammar or spelling mistakes. You are and amazing author

I was sent here via comment swap.

This is super-cute! The amount of thought and passion that has been poured into this is really evident, and I think that makes it all the more better. I love it even more because it seems so real. Most love stories are ridiculously over-exaggerated and only show you the one good part of a relationship. This shows the true side, the bit that no one seems to write about, and it's lovely. I saw no grammar or spelling mistakes when I read through this, so that's a major bonus.

Beautifully written and just genuinely all-round excellent. I'm not usually sappy, but this has me feeling all fuzzy inside. Well done! :)

Okay, this was probably the cutest thing I've read on Mibba. Very sweet & very detailed. Not to mention, everything looks flawless here-- from the grammar to the layout (which I'm in love with, by the way).
"Until you love yourself, I will love you, endlessly." <- That was probably my favorite line.

Lovely. <3

Sigh.

I love this for so many reasons, but mostly because anyone can read it and feel loved!! Its short but overwhelmingly sweet and I'm pretty sure I melted a few times. Every word is loaded with beautiful emotion. And the layout is gorgeous! Well done :)

ahhww so cute :')

Wow. I don't think I've ever read anything quite like this. It's very sweet, detailed with significant emotional depth, and it really captures the feeling of trying to understand another human being because of how much and how intensely you love them. I love the way you talk about their tacit conversation, about how the person you love doesn't understand why you love them, doesn't think they deserve to be loved, to be saved.

Wonderful job.

aww, this is just... lovely.

words that come to mind as i read this (in a technical writing sense) are simple, elegant, and thoughtful.
also from a readers point of view, it is very relateable as it is just one person's thoughts to another.

on another level, the emotional side of this is great. the pain, wonder, and love are all expressed clearly and eloquently, yet concisely.

overall, i think what i'm trying to say is that i cannot see anything to really criticise here, which is what makes this piece wonderful.

thanks for giving us something so touching to read ^.^

Alright. Wow. Just wow. Gimme a moment here. I think this is one of the cutest sappiest things I've ever read and I love it.
Like it's not cute fore the sake of being cute. It's got real emotion and real love and feeling behind it. It just makes me happy and feel loved, even though I know it's not aimed towards me. It just hfdsfgdbajkfh is the only way I can describe how great this is to me and I wish there was more to it!

Hi, I'm from the Comment Swap.
First off, I love your layout. It's nice ans simple, and I had a little giggle when I realized the writing in the photo is One Direction lyrics.
This piece is incredible, dare I say even perfect. I got goosebumps. These are essentially the words that every girl wants to hear someone she loves say to her. Also I love the fact that there are no specific characters mentioned, it makes it seem that much more personal.
Also, I saw no grammar/spelling mistakes.
Wonderful job <3

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I read this story on a comment swap and was happy that I did. This story is so uniquely written and beautifully. You can feel the adoration this character has for the other. Your writing is clear and concise. I also did not see anything wrong with the grammar.

I loved how you went into detail without going over the top. I also think this is a very relatable story. I want to see how the story develops and what's going to happen. Please continue to write and I can't wait to see what happens.

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Alright. So this was beautiful, it was also touching and made me want to keep reading! You have a gift of letting the reader let themselves get lost in the story. Also it was very relatable.

I didn't see anything really wrong with the grammar part. Writing style is simple and crisp, which is something I tend to look for in a story. I like your work, and will be looking forward to some more writings from you.