Love Endlessly - Comments

I'm at a loss for words. This entry has given me complete goosebumps. I love how there were no real characters but a really deep thought process. This is a very difficult and challenging thing to tackle, especially if you're like me and struggle just to get your characters to full develop properly without being boring. This was just incredible.

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Beautiful writing.. so amazing. No mistakes or anything as I read.. PERFECT. Depressing somewhat to me but at the same time so beautiful everything just seemed to flow right into place. It's such a perfect short story. Words cannot even describe how perfect it is. I'm seriously clicking that recommend button. Please keep up this wonderful writing. ~Brittany

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This is a very emotional and deep story, although I personally think its better off as a poem for how short it is but other than that I love it. I saw no spelling or grammar mistakes which is also really good and your deep description just flows easily :)

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That was literally beautiful writing and I applaud you for that. As SadieJBlue said, this is really raw. I think everyone can relate to this and I think everyone feels this way about their partner whether they realize it or not.

I couldn't spot any grammar or spelling mistakes (and I read it again just to make sure) so good job! (: This flows so beautifully and you have the writing style that I think everyone would like to have. Excellent work.

You did a marvelous job, keep it up. Only thing I would suggest is maybe a little something on the cover page; maybe even something as simple as a quote. By the way, your layout is also beautiful. Cheers xo

Hunter xox

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Absolutely beautiful, really that's all I can say. You're able to relate to the things I go through so perfectly, that you might as well have been stealing the words from my head. You've got a gorgeous style of writing, poetic, yet it still flows properly to make a narrative piece of writing. Kudos to you on that; I've never really seen anybody who can do it as well as you do. Keep up the great work, you've got some major potential as a writer. xx

A very, very very emotional start. Deep and connecting and relate-able to the audience. I loved this. It was simple, undefined and raw.

I couldn't spot and grammar mistakes or any spelling mistakes so well done on that. I also can't wait till the story really kicks off because now I'm intrigued and I want more!

I would say to actually make a summary on the first page - like a blurb of a book or even post your introduction on there to draw more readers in so we can know the plot line of what's going to happen. Can't wait to see more from you.

Sadie J. Blue xxx