I love the concept of this story and I can't wait to see where it goes. This story is amazing, just like FTF! You're a fabulous writer and my favorite :)!!!
The first chapter of this short story is amazing! ♥ I just subscribed, and I really, really hope you're still going to be working on this story sometime. The storyline interests me tremendously; it is so tragically .. intense. It intrigues me to no end, and it would be such a loss if you didn't continue. Your writing is great, as is your creativity to come up with something like this. I hope you will update sometime .. whenever you want to or have time to. I'll stay loyal and subscribed to this story for as long as you need to write some more, that's if you are still going to. Thank you so much. :hug: :arms:
Hai I just found your strory..well chapter and it's really good! Very original too, leaves me excited to see what happens next, hope you continue soon. :]
please please continue, what an amazing idea/story!! you really have a talent for writing, i can tell from just one chapter! don't let people forget about this story, add more :)
like i said in previous comment, i love how in a sick twisted way, they're in love and really, it's not abuse because gerard does it cause he really loves frank, unlike other abuse where it's just because the abuser is an absolute d*ckhead. and furthermore WOOP! YOU MADE IT A STORY! YAY! xoxo
um so yeah. this is quite possibly the best one shot i have ever read. it was so intense. fabulous job. i've already suscribed. you are an amazing writer :)
Sounds great! A-fucking-mazing! More soon? It's really great. I don't know what else to say Only that I'm glad you've decided to spread it over more chapters Instead of leaving it as a one-shot. Truly spectacular! ~D xoxo
oh my god, i lov this. gerard is a bastard!! Gerard is the "evil one", who likes to get off on the control he has over frank!! hes not an object! aww, and frank would rather get him off, than receive a beating. Gerard has it made.0_o creep. newayz, continue!!
it was so....creepy, but in a lovely way. There relationship is so twisted and fucked up, but it works for both of them. It makes you feel bad for frank, but then again, would frank know what to do if he didn't have gerard? and in some werid fucked up way, gerard really does love frank.
That was scary, yet it had this sweet tone to it. It was clear pretty damn quick that Frank loves Gerard, yet Gerard seems a bit ... creepy, maybe? I don't know. It had this amazing, strange vibe to it that I really adored.
And everyone seems to want this turn into a story, but to be honest, I do think you should leave it be a one-shot. The power of a one-shot fits this more. :shifty