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TURN THIS INTO A STORY IM SERIOUS! it has all the potential in the world! please! xx times infinity

Aww, thanks, Cordee!!!

As you know, I was a tad nervous about posting this, especially after being away for so long. So thank you for taking the time to give me such good feedback.

I'm happy you mentioned both sides of their relationship...like, is it in Frank's nature or has he just been trained by Gerard to be like this? And if they both want it, is it wrong?

I guess everyone should decide for themselves, but if anyone is willing to share their thoughts, that would be love.

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First of all, grrrr for leaving this as a one shot. Seriously.

Second of all, Dam.

At first I was unsure where it was heading, the effect of the title and the "I just wanted to have a look." somehow made me think of a Pet Store scenario. But then setting into it you catch on to how scared he was that he would be caught, but willing to risk it just to get a small glance of the outside world.

“Don’t fret, precious. I’m here.” That line struck me, mainly because I was struggling to find how it was delivered until you stated. And that completely threw me because I was so dam convinced that it would have been the complete opposite.

I loved how you used the reference to his hair length to show just how far Gerard's control over him goes. Also the conditioning part, seeing how just wrapped up in this Frank (I hope it's Frank.) is.

The one thing that does leave me searching my mind for, is trying to determined how this all started. Did Frank get pulled into this all, being the weak one and persuaded into his current position by Gerard, or did he willingly want to be domineered like this?

He seems thankful for everything Gerard does, even when he hurts him. He knows its coming and still he doesn’t hate him for it. At the end of it I think I was more siding with the fact that he willingly wants it to be like this.

The song and the storyline are a completely perfect match. Perfect.

And I love the mentioning of the evil ones, especially here:

I couldn’t help thinking how lucky I was to have Gerard to protect me from the evil ones.

I loved it. Makes you realise that even while this may not be normal, there both content with it.

Glad to see that the elephant hasn’t completely screwed you over. You’re back on form. 