Pet - Comments

First off; I love you before I even read the chapter. I absolutely adore the song Pet and it's now stuck in my head :tehe:
Secondly; I think I just made the mistake of playing the song and reading the writing. It was good, very good, but the music was a bit of a distraction.
Third; I'm glad you chose Pet over 'Couting Bodies like Sheep'. It just fitted more :)

Oh. My. God.
That was absolutely brilliant.
I was definitely getting the "stockholm sydrome" feeling, and that Gerard was hiding Frank because he was kidnapped or something ..

PLEASE turn this into a story. It's beyond amazing, and there's heaps of different directions you could take it ...
Pleaaaaase. =]

it was a little different, but I still really liked it xD

That was the best oneshot I've ever read. It was absolutely amazing, so intense, tragic and well written. I wouldn't want you to turn it into a story, though, I think it's beautiful as it is. You're a great writer, no doubt about it, but making a story out of it might take away the intensity. Though I'd definitely read it if you would post a chapter 2. (:

omg; wow
that was amazing, it is intense
and i agree that this could so be a story.

But either way;
as a one shot, though, you really got frank's emotions and beliefs about his life to come across strongly
i loved it. :]

you are an amazing writer.

EDIT: by the way; i really like the song with this story :D

i liked it, it was really well written :)

the layout is awesome btw

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Does this HAVE to be a one-shot?

Can you add more?

please?!

I loved it!

A whole lot!

Please??

Update Spoon! (I hopes!)

Wow, that was intense!
This has so much potential - I'm going to subscribe, just in case you decide to continue it and make it into something more. (hinthint)

Fantastically written, you really brought across the way Frank accepts the way life is for him, as if it's all he's ever known.
And also Gerard, the way he's tender and loving one moment, and then suddenly just lashes out.
Very scary.

Pleeeeeease write more?

xoxoxox

This. Is. AWESOME! Totally amazing. Probably the most original Frerard I've read in about six months.

Amazing.

As for the story : That was really good! I liked it. And I like how you were able to convey that Gerard was the manipulator without having to directly say it.

As for Gerard: he's the evil one. The shades are pulled over Frank's eyes!!! :(

And as for Frank: Wake up and smell the coffee!!!!

Like I said, I loved it :)

good on ya, mate! Found this while browsing...awesome. You my girl are one HELL of a storyteller.

Insanity!

That was so eery. When I started to read I was like:"hmm... Frank is being manipulated..."

But it was so tragic! I felt for poor Frankie... Holding on to all those hopes... Doing everything for evil Gerard.

This was beautiful!<33
i loves it.

i loves yous!

This was absolutely amazing

YOU SHOULD REALLY TURN THIS INTO A STORY!!
ITS AMAZING!

When Frank says 'the evil ones' does he mean humans, or outsiders?
That's one of the things that got me to thinking.
I seriously think that this was a great one-shot, and I hope to see FTF coming back soon :D
Either that or more one-shots. :tehe:
Glad to see that you're back.

i like it ripley
well written
love the begining, middle and end
loved the whole thing :)
welcome back
xxxxxxooooooo

Very well written, I like it
Poor Frank is on a tight leash though, he only wanted to see out the window.. :-/
This would be a wonderful story too *hint... hint*

Wow, this is really well written and intense and... it's great!

dude this is intense its so well written!!

i agree with paintthesilence
make it story please!
i love it.
i like how in a weird way they actually do love eaach other and how what's going on isn't actually wrong because of their love for each other =]
i want there to be a whole story because i want to know more about them and why gerard does and how frank ended up there because he can't have been totally in someone's control all his life.
xoxo