Skyfall - Comments

Jesus Christ, it was THE REAL LIAM WHAT
You write suspense like a pro.
Seriously. Write crime novels.
Do it now.

I'm a new reader and I refuse to look at other comments for fear of spoiling the story, but I just finished chapter 5 and I think Louis is the killer. I'll find out soon enough I suppose. I love this.

I want to comment and yell and scream about things but I don't want to give everything away for someone else so I'm just going to say A++
You really had me going and I'm so glad I read this all in one go -- waiting for an update would have killed me.

I loooove this!! It was a really cool concept. :))

I haven't even started reading this and this sounds fantastic. I'm looking forward to devouring the entire thing when it isn't 4 in the morning.

This entire story is 1000% perf. Well done, mate.

Hmm.. I would prefer The Smiths.. A married crile fighting couple

I was right yea!!!!! Amazing final chapters and awww poor Niall didn't get the girl. <3

HAPPY ENDING, yay. :D

Ah!!! I loved the last chapter and epilogue! I definitely don't suspect Liam in the slightest! This was such a good story, gah! I hope you do end up writing a sequel :)

Thank you. I should've seen that coming too. Because, duh, they'd say he died so he could go back to living a normal life. I don't know how to wrap this comment up without repeating myself, but seriously, this story is love.

...... Excuse me while I go off and quietly implode somewhere.

*le sigh* I don't really have much to say, especially after you killed off Douglas (not cool). I should've seen it all along. Great job on this story, it's just too awesome for words. There's an epilogue, does that mean Niall finally tries to charm or does charm his way into her heart? And does Aerabella find out after they had sex she's pregnant with Douglas's kid? I'm totally going all Pearl Harbor ending on this (at least I'm pretty sure that's the movie I'm thinking of). But I'm probably totally left field with that.

(But she should totally get with Niall and raise her and Douglas's kid together, just sayin' :3)

NO, COME BACK HERE! MAKE DOUGLAS COME BACK TO LIFE, SO THEY HAVE A HAPPY ENDING. If we're gonna die, I'd rather die happy! And this isn't happy!

ohmygod is it the real Liam or Niall? I AM SO CONFUSED BUT IN A GOOD WAY.

ohmygod is it the real Liam or Niall? I AM SO CONFUSED BUT IN A GOOD WAY.

Damn okay this is hurting my head. Is it the real Liam? I feel like it's going to be the REAL Liam Payne. Am I right? UPDATE! My emotions are everywhere D:

I am beyond frustrated with myself and this story here. I'm gonna make one last call and say it's Niall. Final answer. No doubt in my mind, because, duh, I knew it all along (*cough cough*. ALMOST, okay?)

I hate to say it, but thank you. It's been a long time since I've been stumped over a murder mystery. And even though I don't like it, it's a really nice change. I'm sorry I'm expressing all these mixed feelings, I love this story to bits, I really do. But it's just so FRUSTRATING.

I can't believe I didn't see it all along. I'm replaying all of the little Niall bits in my head now and it's making sense. He has motive, jealousy, because maybe he wanted the girls Louis and Harry had. And wait... Never mind, not sure if the killer is messing with Aerabella as Niall learns and freaks out about the fact that Doug did the dirty with her or not. Plus the fact that he tries to frame another murder on Liam (one that he probably committed himself, just put Liam in his shoes). You know what? I give up...

I swear to god, if it's not Niall (especially if it ends up being Louis or the real Liam) I'm going to freak. And never forgive myself. So I'm going to re-read the whole story and double check just to make sure.

Update soon please, the suspense is killing me :(

Oh man. It doesn't seem like it can be anyone from 1D! It's gotta be someone in the police department, that slime ball or her captain!

What? Louis, I don't think she trusted him so it's not him. And Douglas, it's not him because well, we heard his side of story about how he didn't know so its not him. So...? ugh. AND I JSUT WANNT SLAP EVERYONE, LIKE STOP PICKING ON DOUGLAS!

LKJSDFLKJSDkfs;lkdjgl;ask. This is just too amazing for words. Love it.
(: