Edge of the Water - Comments

Can not wait for an update its so good

Okay, I just love how sassy Belle gets with Jon. It just cracks me up because you can tell he is so not expecting it! He's so used to having girls drop at his feet so I think it's a nice change of pace for him Especially when they were running together! I thought that was hilarious. Patrick and Zoey are so cute though! I thought it was just precious when they were at the beach and she was all shivering but didn't want to go inside. They just have the most adorable relationship and I hope they last forever and ever!

OKAY I FINALLY HAD TIME TO GET ALL CAUGHT UP AND OH MY GOD PATRICK AND ZOEY ARE SO SWEET AND YOU LEFT ME ON A CLIFFHANGER AND UGHHGHHHHHH BELLE AND TAZER ARE STARTING TO MAKE ME MAD LIKE C'MON JUST FALL IN LOVE ALREADY PLEASEEEEEEEE and yeah. Please update soon!! Lol.

hi! ive just started reading this story and im about halfway done with it - but holy crap, this is one of the best Hawks stories ive read on here! it's beautifully written and I cant stop reading it! its such a unique plot and I love what zoey and Patrick have going on so much! theyre really cute together. I hope zoey doesn't get both the girls kicked off the ship! please update soon, this is such a great story, wow!

such a cute story - keep updating it!! It's great!! :)

I am so in love with this you have no idea.
It's perfect

Oh no what are they gonna do. lol i love this.

Hello.
This. Is. Beautiful.
Update? :)
Oh! And are you any better? :)

This hasn't been updated in far too long-hopefully you update soon because it's one of my favorite stories on here.

I love this story so much! Belle always gets so sassy with Jon and I loved her little flirt on the treadmill.
Zoey and Patrick are bacisally the cutest thing ever. He was so cute during the karaoke and I loved their scene in the beach!

Get well soon Katie <3 Mibba loves you!

i loved that ending. Haha poor jon, he just can't catch a break.

yay you updated :)

Oh my gosh, the boys picking on Jon was hilarious!
And the beach seen was perfect. Poor Belle is so scared of the water.
That would be a crazy dinner. I be tthose boys can eat!

i really want belle to be with jon! update soon!

I really love this story! I don't know what else to say, but I can't wait for you to update! :)

i love the girls involvement with all of the guys, it's entertaining. zoey was funny as usual in this chapter, which i love, and i really really hope belle breaks up with her boyfriend and she and jon get together.

OMGGGGGGGGGG! MOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEE!

Bring on the fun! Im ready! =D

i can't wait to see what happens next! update soon!

Oh no i can't wait to see what drama is going to come next!!