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  • jazter

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    Zoey's flirting with fire to do things that only guests are supposed to do and being in guest-only space without legitimate reason. I'm pretty sure there's a definite divide between guests and staff and I doubt that the PTB have much of a sense of humor about staff crossing that boundary. She should know better. I just hope that she doesn't find her employment terminated at the next port of call.
    December 20th, 2012 at 11:54pm
  • gitadeon

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    Oh and happy birthday btw!
    December 10th, 2012 at 03:53am
  • gitadeon

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    Oh and happy birthday btw!
    December 10th, 2012 at 03:53am
  • gitadeon

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    Exams SUCK. They take away precious writing time and precious reading time! This chapter seriously made me laugh.

    “It was skin on skin contact! You don't want this shirt back!”

    TOO FUNNY!

    Poor Belle though. At least she's all fit and toned and not all flabby cause that would suck if she was! hehe.
    December 10th, 2012 at 03:53am
  • Sunber

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    @ Dance.Dance.Dance
    THANK YOU!!! Cute
    No; exams suck, they are definitely not a good birthday present. I have one ON my birthday at 9am Sad
    December 9th, 2012 at 03:47am
  • saudade.

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    I love Zoey and Belle, haha. I'm curious to see how Belle deals with both Jon and Oliver. Can't wait for more!

    Happy birthday, by the way! Although exams are certainly no birthday gift...
    December 9th, 2012 at 03:43am
  • allietoews

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    Best one yet!
    November 29th, 2012 at 10:53pm
  • Sunber

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    @ gitadeon
    Aw, you're so precious! Thank you so much! Glad you like it! Cute
    November 29th, 2012 at 03:34am
  • gitadeon

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    This story is perfect! I am so interested to see where it goes. I have nothing negative to say about it at all. This is a totally different scenario than any other stories and that's what makes me love it even more. I'm sorry if this comment didn't really give you stuff to work on with your story, it's just too good!
    November 29th, 2012 at 03:31am
  • allietoews

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    Love!
    November 22nd, 2012 at 12:45am
  • little sparrow.

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    Why is this so perfect?
    I love the updates and this story and
    well everything.
    Keep up the great work!
    November 20th, 2012 at 06:36am
  • Sunber

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    @ ilovehockey4952
    Facepalm I knew that, and I was thinking that. But I typed the opposite. Just fixed it! Cute
    And thank you!
    November 17th, 2012 at 02:09am
  • ilovehockey4952

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    Love the story! FYI though skaters muscle mass in in their thighs and butts
    November 17th, 2012 at 12:20am
  • little sparrow.

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    I am in love, this story is absolutely amazing and I can't wait for the next update!
    November 16th, 2012 at 01:29am
  • saudade.

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    Curious to see what's going to happen with the boys! Update soon!
    November 16th, 2012 at 01:05am
  • Maddi;

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    This story is amazing! I like how Belle and Zoey are total opposites, but they're still best friends Cute I think I'm a bit more like Belle, so I can really relate to her, but I think Zoey is so fun and sassy! I can't wait to see what's going to happen with the boys tehe
    November 14th, 2012 at 12:32am
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