I really like the story! Like i love Darius, his character is pretty amazing. Abby got me annoyed when she was ignoring him and all! Update soon! The only advice i will give you is to try to fix a few grammatical errors, like it shifts from past tense to present tense. So you might want to keep it in one tense and change it a bit. Other than that, i love it! ;)
@ Sailor Meranda @ thirtysecondstoearth Thanks guys, I know it is moving fast but I am slowing it down now.... I kicked myself after posting the chapter but i'm glad you guys liked it! A new chapter will be up soon :) I just gotta go to Senior stuff :)
It moved along pretty fast, a lot faster than I expected. However, when I saw how fast it was going I wasn't sure if i'd like it or not...but I love it. : )