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  • kartal1984

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    I am so happy you updated this story, and it was a great update as well. :) Please do keep them coming. :)
    August 26th, 2013 at 03:30pm
  • soupy

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    I loved Sid skulking out of Kelly's bedroom - with her mom shooting him dagger eyes! Come on, Mom - look at him! Kelly would be crazy NOT to do him!!

    And it was interesting to get Troy's opinion on Sid and Kelly's relationship - I guess everyone knew it would happen. It just took time for Sid to be able to admit it.

    I am pretty sure that Kelly feels the same way - Sid just has to make his move.
    August 24th, 2013 at 04:22am
  • kecole7

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    Ohhhhh I like where this is headed! They have to move together when camp starts! I love how awesome they are together. Thank you for the long one :)
    August 23rd, 2013 at 10:19pm
  • Sportsfan83

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    @ Thatmom
    Summer is always fun....too bad it's almost over. Thanks for you comments! I liked bringing in a funnier side to Troy too
    August 23rd, 2013 at 09:52pm
  • Thatmom

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    I hope by busy summer you also mean fun summer. Troy joking with Sid was too funny. Can't wait for Sid and Kelly's future together ! Why wait? Sid is right about knowing she was the one since they were 16. So precious.
    August 23rd, 2013 at 09:38pm
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    @ Jayess
    OMG I must work that into the story some how...maybe when the season starts or something. Amazing! Thanks for reading...I'm hoping for an update shortly. It's all in my head, just need to get it on paper
    July 11th, 2013 at 05:23pm
  • Jayess

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    ooh, ooh, and then Sid could ask Claude if he'd had all his shots. Then insinuate how he knows Claude's been neutered... All the while laughing his ass off.
    July 10th, 2013 at 11:26pm
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    @ Jayess
    bahahha YES! So true. Thank you for your comment! That just made my day
    July 10th, 2013 at 09:35pm
  • Jayess

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    Well, think of this way, Sid: you can truthfully call Claude Giroux a pussy to his face. And then call him mangy. There are silver linings...
    July 10th, 2013 at 02:01am
  • kecole7

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    Great update! I am really looking forward to Kelly seeing the Crosby's again! Update again soon please!
    July 8th, 2013 at 09:44pm
  • kartal1984

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    Firstly, Calgary flood was very sad, I live in Cochrane and we didn't get affected but Calgary is a big part of our life (work and friends are all in Calgary) it was really sad but Calgarians have a strong community and pulled it together to clean the city up and make Stampede happen (come hell or high water)!! :) Little bit of good news :) I hope you weren't affected too much by the floods (assuming that you are from and/or in Calgary area).

    Secondly, your updates are always worth the wait and this was fantastic - I hope to see another one soon.
    July 4th, 2013 at 11:26pm
  • Thatmom

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    First and foremost......Calgary has been in my prayers throughout the flooding. We vacationed there last summer and LOVED it!! We did the Lake Louise and Banff, ate at great restaurants, and did some hiking and biking. Glad things are returning to normal. Now, the update...... Loved it. I really love the journey of Sid and Kelly. It's the details and relationships between the two families that make it so great. Thank you.
    July 4th, 2013 at 10:33pm
  • aa.smiley

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    OH EM GEE PLEASE KEEP UPDATING :) TOTALLY AWESOME STORY :) I'VE ACTUALLY GONE BACK AND RE-READ THE CHAPTERS CUZ THEY'RE SO AWESOME.
    June 8th, 2013 at 09:27pm
  • kecole7

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    Haha the Giroux reference was brilliant! I am so happy Kelly calmed down I look forward to hearing about the conversation between her and her mother that put her at ease. Also, how does her mom feel about her and Sid?? Great story I love it soooo much!!! Update lots please ;)
    June 7th, 2013 at 08:30pm
  • kartal1984

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    lol loved it!! So worth the wait, please don't stop writing this story, because it is funny and charming and cute all at the same time!! Whoever said it was boring is on some sort of a drug I think... lol Loved the Giroux reference it was funny.. :)
    June 7th, 2013 at 04:01pm
  • soupy

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    Kelly seems to have worked through some of her issues of her mom "moving on" - I am sure that is a difficult thing to accept. I do like how Sidney is there to support her...not necessarily agree with her, but understand where she is coming from and help her get over the hurt - maybe seeing things from another perspective.

    And I am glad you decided to continue. You have a very good story with very real characters. I think you are very brave to put your writing on such a public forum, as writing is such a personal venture.

    Please know there are many of us who appreciate your effort - and talent.
    June 7th, 2013 at 09:27am
  • kartal1984

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    Update please!!! There are a lot of us that actually really enjoy this story :) I am going through withdrawals!!!
    May 29th, 2013 at 04:22pm
  • Thatmom

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    I love this story. I am so disappointed you won't be working on this anymore.
    May 25th, 2013 at 01:29pm
  • kecole7

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    Oooohhhhhhh another man! I hope Kelly is happy for her mom and wants her to be happy. I liked this flashback as it shed some light on what happened to her dad. Thank you for updating the story! :)
    May 24th, 2013 at 08:22pm
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    @ Thatmom
    Don't worry. It's coming. I promise. :)
    May 22nd, 2013 at 11:40pm