The Dancer - Comments

I love this sooo much! Can't wait for more :)

Loved it! Can't wait for more!

Go Dakota! Handling the business! I loved Papa Gates' reaction, too. "That bitch showed up here?" That's golden. Can't wait to see where you go with this. Re-reading...you know.

Well, I'm super happy you updated this!!!! I love that Papa Gates was there spilling on Brian, lol and I laughed at the chick showing up at his house!! She handled that very well! Also, I totally though she was going to taunt Brian from his bedroom or something silly like that- and I totally would have scammed one of his shirts too!

Honestly I dint know how this poor girl hasn't gone bald and dropped yet. All that stress and overexertion is going to catch up with her I swear!! And I hate her mom a little more every chapter. I hope Dakota confides in Brian soon, she needs some help and I hope it comes from him. Love this!

@ gothique4
ahhh shitty. thanks for telling me! i thought i had a new one ready butttt i guess not. lmao.

Chapter 16 and 17 are the same chapters hun

Loved the update!

if her mother thought her daughters would make money in hell she'd kill them without a second thought. The fucking cow should go out and do her own jobs if she loves money that much :-(

I hate that she had to lie to her mother, but we all know it's necessary. Glad she's getting to go to Cali again. And Brian's so sweet. Wonder if he'll feel the same if/when he discovers the truth about her.

damn I really hate her family too. The scamming fucks need to leave her the hell alone and let her live her life

I really hate her family! And their scamming, she needs to come clean to brisn.. it will be rough,but I think he can help her<. Maybe. Lol.

loved it!!!

Loved! Which room is she going to go to?? Update soon!

I hope she goes to brians room inside of the other one. This is one of my favorite stories. Please Keep updating.

Bless her heart. Brian's making everything so complicated. And she can't fix it without telling him the truth...and telling him the truth might actually result in him leaving and then, well, she's right back where she started. However, this particular evening, I hope she can brush Luke off pretty quick and go up to Brian's room. :-)

Damn nice smut haha. Really dont like her home life.. can't wait for more =)

Good god woman that was so hot. Seeing Brian as the romantic type is kinda cute.

Ugh her mother is so blinded with love of money she doesn't give a shit were Dakota even was.

Uhm...holy shit! That was seriously one of the hottest things I've read! Great detailing lady. Fucking Brian Haner Jr= lady killer, Dakota held her own though lol. Ditto what Vixyn of Syn said, wished she woulda told her mom to fuck off already!

He's a sweetie. Wish she could find it in herself to tell her mom to fuck off. :)