The Dancer - Comments

Holy hell woman * fans self*, that was so fucking sexy!!! First off, as a dance enthusiast, I seriously appreciated this whole chapter!!! The club dancing was so hot, and believe it or not I have watched that video on YouTube before!!! I love Reggaeton style dancing! Lol, back to the story.., when she went down on him in his car I was like 'Hallelujah'. I've fantasized about this shit! Lol TMI maybe? Meh. That's just how I roll :P.

I loved the end of this with her luring him upstairs, she is so confident! Here's to hoping there is a grande sex scene in the next update! I'm guessing no, but a girl can dream right? :D. Oh, and last, but not least- Zacky and Matt deserve a mention for being awesome. Of course they would take video evidence of BrIan tearin up the dance floor ( have you seen his awkward bum slapping and chicken dance on YouTube?). I thought Zacky was really cute too for caring about Brian getting attached to a lady player.. Kinda funny:p Update soon!! Your awesome lady!!!

HOLLY EFFING SHIT !!!!

Loved! Can't wait for more!

Loved it, can't wait for more

hahaha I love the text messages between Dakota and Brian. He's definitely creepin' lol

I love Jimmy's advice about falling over :-)

Can't wait to see what happens next - Brian's probably going to forget to play he's gonna be drooling over her lol

Haha, I love that Brian was creepin' on her and then txt her just to mess with her. Lol. I could so picture that. Another great update! I like that her and Bri are getting so friendly. Can't wait to see what happens at the after party!!!!!

It was great! It's so nice that she can finally get away from all the bullshit at home and relax. And flirting with a really sexy guitarist doesn't hurt, either. I loved Jimmy telling them to make it look like it was on purpose if they fell. LOL!

love this please update soon

Great update!! Cant wait to see what next!!

Great update! I really liked that they just simply hung out. God, could you imagine underwear shopping with him? Lol. Would be a fun time! I can't wait to see what happens when she heads to Cali again.:D

I love Brian showing up wherever she is, it cracks me up! I love this update and can't wait for the next one love c:

oh man if my mother had smacked me a Dakota's age about going on a date, she would have had a right hook straight to the face

Brian is so stalking her hahahaha. I bet he had to adjust his pants after seeing the zebra print corset :p

I'm sorry, but I don't care if he is Synyster Gates. I'd tell him what a fucking creeper he is. Lol.
Sounds like they're going to have a good time in Long Beach :D

Brian keep trying lol! loved it cant wait for more

Damn! Brian just keeps running into brick walls. Lol.

I can't even describe how much I loved this chapter!!! I knew it would be them in the VIP. I absolutely love how she's making him put the chase on her, it's always so much better like that:D you get the build up! I really wish shed get out of the family business! And I don't blame her for not succumbing to Gates' charm, the man does only seem interested In getting it in with her right now. Update soon. This is one of my fav stories!

hahaha I think Brian's a little miffed that he can't get anywhere :-)

Loved it =)

hahahaha I think Zacky has it spot it - Brian is going to have his work come out for him and he's gonna get all pissy and bitchy. I can't wait lol

I love how she blew him off to "go to church" :-)

Two forceful personalities, trying to get what they want? Yeah, this is gonna be fun. Lol.