The Dancer - Comments

Haha, that was perfect! When she told him she had to go to church. That was perfect. I love how confident she is. I think this story is so good. I can't wait for more meetings between them. And seriously, Gates is so smooth...NOT. Lol. Update soon!! Please!

Haha. Good update! Cant wait for more! Update again soon!

Love this, can't wait for more!

I love this story so much! I hate her family life! Her mother is a nightmare. And what's her sisters issue?
On a lighter note, I really like how she mentors kids. I can't wait for her and Brian to meet:D update soon! Oh, and the poly ore for this chapter was awesome. Great clothes:)

Why Is Gem Being Like That?

Wow...her mom sucks, and Gemma is being a pissy little twat!

I'm so excited about her time in Long Beach! :)

Loved the update! I really don't like Dakotas mom though. Update again soon!

Her mother is certainly not reedeeming herself in this chapter. I'm glad that Dakota's keeping the money from her dance teaching out of that whore's hands :-)

Gemma ain't much better :-( How dare she diss on the boys music.

Her mother won't kick her out - Dakota's one of her meal tickets and she can't control her if she isn't there.

Love her club outfit - if that skirt was any shorter it would be a belt :p

Damn their mother is a selfish whore :-(

I love how Brian's stalking her facebook and thinks that sleeping with her once will get rid of the itch. Muahahahahaha I can see him falling in lurvvvve :-)

Ugh. What a shitty mom. It's sad that she's dying, but...that doesn't change that she's a selfish woman. Hmmm. Brian's reminding me of someone I know. Lol. Update ASAP!

Strait up, Dakota's mother sounds like a hag. That's a raw deal she's involved in. Next, I think it's so funny that Brians been somewhat creeping her Facebook. He thinks he can just sleep with her to get her out of his system, but I have the feeling that it will just suck him in more. I love this so much already:D can't wait for them to actually meet and everything!

loved it!

I absolutely love this story. Please update soon!!!

I really love this!

Loved it!

Good update! Cant wait for more!

Alright! Now we're getting a little more into their backgrounds and such. Love it! Thank God for date rape drugs. LMAO! Being used for the opposite use...that's irony at its best. ;)

I'm so excited for this story!!!! Such a great idea and yeah, I love it so far:D I loved how you switched between the two of them and how she intrigued him with her dancing...the fact that she wasnt mostly naked and gyrating on the floor was great too! lol :) cant wait for more

Update ASAP

I seriously love this so much right now, I cant wait for more haha