@ moonprotector I have been computerless for about 3 months, and haven't been able to write updates, So it may be a good handful of days before it'll be updated ^^' sorry
Dear author, that is by far one of the best Lord Of The Rings fan fiction stories I have ever read. Your writing style fits that of the Lord Of The Rings and that's great. I liked the characters you created and how you potrayed Legolas and Aragorn and Gandalf as well. You have a few grammar/spelling mistakes and some words you chose to use which don't fit but other than that this is a great and interesting story. Keep up the great work and share your imagination with everyone at mibbaland. That's all from me so bye. ~Marian.
Dear author, that is by far one of the best Lord Of The Rings fan fiction stories I have ever read. Your writing style fits that of the Lord Of The Rings and that's great. I liked the characters you created and how you potrayed Legolas and Aragorn and Gandalf as well. You have a few grammar/spelling mistakes and some words you chose to use which don't fit but other than that this is a great and interesting story. Keep up the great work and share your imagination with everyone at mibbaland. That's all from me so bye. ~Marian.
I'm now on chapter 10, it's a good story, but your typos and use of wrong words is making it difficult to read. You need to have people proof read your material before posting it. :)
Just finished chapter 1, good start, but i'm noticing a lot of typos...do you have a beta reader? If not you might want to ask around if someone could for you, it will save you time and grief in the long run, trust me! :)
@ Stormborn Well thank you very much, I am glad you are enjoying the story so far. And Yes tomorrow in fact. hoping to go see it and get re-inspired for My "The Hobbit" Fan fiction again.
I'm only one chapter in and I'm already enjoying this :] Good LOTR fics on this site are hard to come by. Keep up the good work :] Also are you going to go see the Hobbit?