Heartbreak Warfare - Comments

I feel so sad. I hope they mend their friendship soon!!!

This story makes me feel crazy and I want her to tell him and get rid of Wren and love Harry but I know that can't happen and I wish it could and I'm sad because Charlie will be confused and I won't like that and wah I have a lot of feelings

Dear delicate butterfly,
I must say that I am a lot less angrier then before.With Louis finally seeing that how you so awesomely put it "suddenly Olivia has blood on her hands too" makes me happy because I really want Lou to trust Haz again and to stop being such a prick to him.I must say that I was really shocked and happy when Harry said that he never asked Louis about Olivia out of respect.You're right when it comes to me at least,I don't like Wren.Not because he's a bad guy but he could've been more encouraging to let Harry know that he has a son instead of playing daddy himself.On the other hand I'm extremely intrigued after your AN, really makes me impatient to know what happened and is going to happen.
Anxious/excited/nervous for more!:D
P.S-Thanks for updating so often and not making us wait:)

I KNEW Harry was the father. Oh my gosh. This is getting so good. Please update!:)

@halcyondays
No problem! I've been feeling inspired for this story (:
Thanks for reading!

This story is so incredible. I really appreciate how often you've been updating!

I like Wren more than Harry, honestly. I mean, Olivia had just been cheated on quite publicly and moved across the ocean for someone who betrayed her trust. And ending up pregnant wasn't planned, but I think of it were me in that situation, I wouldnt have contacted Harry. It's not like just cuz she's pregnant she's going to be comfortable seeing him after going through that. And Wren was there, in the right place at the right time...and he's been Charlie's dad. To me, the timing for the baby wasnt meant to have a place for harry in it, you know? life is life and that happens. While its dissapointing that Harry never had the chance to be a dad, I actually get Olivia's decision not to tell him and I'm cool with it. I like that I'm not rooting for Harry in a Harry fic! Haha I hope they work things out as parents, but I hope her and Wren stay together. I'm also eager to hear more about this whole Liam/Louis drama and the Dean/Louis relationship. I LOVE IT!!!

I wouldn't say we are outraged towards you, I can see how you would feel that way because you are the author. But you are correct, obviously, there is five years of unknown information. I can't wait to read the rest of your story. I particularly liked being outraged towards Olivia because I continued to read the chapter instead of putting it to rest for the night.

This update made me particularly happy, because it showed Harry showing remorse towards his lost friendship between him and Louis. I can't wait to read the growth of their friendships and can only hope it goes up from here. :)

I can't help but not like Olivia in that last chapter, especially when she's ranting how Harry isn't the father. Harry was never given the CHANCE to be his father, because Olivia never told him. I can only imagine how Harry will react when he finds out his has a kid that calls somebody else daddy, I can see it killing him. I also get the feeling that Olivia doesn't love Wren, I believe she has feelings for him, but not for the right reasons. I feel like she got with Wren because she knew he had liked her and she was going through some hard times at the moment with Harry and enjoyed the attention and wanted her kid to have a father figure in its life. I just don't feel the love between her and Wren like I did with Olivia and Harry.

@lilxladyx143
Thank you so much for your comment! As I said to Adleigh_Lynn212, there's more to the story than meets the eye when it comes to the father situation. And I can't believe you read both my stories in one night! haha I hope you got some sleep.

holy shit...just read Stars and Stripes and this story all in one night. They were addicting!! I love how you write, and this sequel definitely shocked me a lot. I have to agree with @Adleigh_Lynn212 I literally got angry at Olivia this chapter. I know what Harry did is unforgivable, but that doesn't give her the right to take away his opportunity of being a father and then talk about how Wren was there for everything when she never even TOLD Harry about his own kid. Grr I'm getting all worked up again ahah sorry about the rant, but I'm loving this story and I'm looking forward to seeing how this all plays out! (:

Naaawww Wren is such a good man!

@Adleigh_Lynn212
I'm thrilled you're invested in this story to the point where it brings you to comment your fury haha. This will most certainly be addressed as the story goes on. Harry is definitely not the only one at fault here, but what he did broke their trust indefinitely and that stemmed her reasoning behind keeping him in the dark about this. But it isn't the sole reason she did so. I'm so glad you voiced your opinions, AND they were valid and just. Writers always want to hear feedback, but in a constructive manner. Unfortunately, they generally get bashed and vicious hate for their creations, and I just want to thank you for your input. It means so much (:
And more will be coming soon, I promise!

I completely love your story and writing style.Your ability to make it realistic is amazing and such a great talent!
Anyway this is all one big mess though.Kind of feels like a soap at points just because of everything going on and what's all happened.It was a little shocking about Wren and Olivia however not as much of a shocker as taking in what has all happened since the guys split.
I'm pretty pissed off at Olivia right now though.I know Harry screwed up major and that's why she left which she had every right to.However I comeptely disagree that she has this right to go all "Harry is just a sperm donor"!That just really pisses me off because I know that Wren has been the father figure here and everything but she never even gave Harry the chance to be more than just a sperm donor.There are dead beat dads out there but Olivia put Harry in that category with no chance given to him to prove any different.I'm sorry I'm just really riled up over that right now!!I really want someone to just smack Olvia and point out that it doesn't matter who she wants to be the father,Harry is and he should be given the chance to be one and given the chance to be called Daddy.That's my major thing that I have against this story right now and it pissed me off enough to comment so I guess doing that is one way to make a silent reader vocal haha.Side note when Harry finds out he's a Dad I really don't think Olvia would have any place to get mad at Harry if he is mad/upset with her.I'm personally leaning more towards it is Olvias fault that Harry wasn't able to be a good father because she didnt let him know he was and its a bunch of bull shit if she tries to try excuse not telling because of what happened between the two of them.That's selfish and she shouldn't get to make the choice of Harry not bein there for their son.I fully brlieved Harry would of manned up,be a good father and Olivia didnt want that because she was scared,so selfish.
Again I love your writing just not Olivia right now.I really want Harry and Olvia to be together again though haha
More soon please!:)
P.S-Sorry for the rant.

yay! Please update soon :)) This was wonderful!!

yay! Please update soon :)) This was wonderful!!

please update soon!

I can't believe she's marrying him!! Love this story!
And Marcel (Harry) dancing along with Leeroy (Liam) in the background xD

Eeeeeek!!! I'm glad you're back!! I adore this story!!! I can't wait for more!!

yay glad you're back!