Heartbreak Warfare - Comments

loved it!

Seriously great update well worth the wait, amazing

Ah, I knew Charlie would turn out to be Harry's! I can't wait to see what happens when they see each other and when/if he finds out he's a dad!

@ Caitosaur.
Yeah, the picture I had was of him younger, maybe five-ish but I couldn't find it again. Imagine he's four...haha

I've just finished reading the prequel, and then this, and it is AMAZING! Please update soon :)

Is Dean going to ask Louis to marry him?? Aww

Oh my god. This was too much to process. I feel bad that louis felt the needs to hide! And she has a kid and omg!!! I can't even handle this right now! You need to update soon, because I don't have any idea what's going to happen and I love it! Aaaah! Update soon

She has a kid AND Louis is gay?! I did not see that coming. Good God you must just love to create drama. I'm anticipating the rest of the bands reaction. And also I don't like Wren all that much but honestly who does. I can't wait for the next chapter!! :)

I can tell this is going to be drama packed I love it and can't wait for more!

I can tell this is going to be drama packed I love it and can't wait for more!

OMG.
Charlie is Harry's son!!

I feel like the kid you chose for Charlie looks a bit old for a four year old.... five?
That kid looks at least seven or eight.
I'd know, I babysit
Also, I was severely confused as to who Dean was until they told Liam and then it was all *click* and my brain worked.

Ah so is she married to Wren or are they dating?! And is Charlie actually Harry's?! oh goodness.

I've spent my entire day reading Stars and Stripes and the first two chapters of this and I am totally in love. I'm kind of a comment snob, but I really want to let you know that I enjoy your writing so much!! I'll be checking out your other stories and I can't wait to see what's in store for this one!!

Yay, so excited for this to get started again! :)

I neeeed more!
Harry and Olivia need to reunite and Olivia best not be dating Louis!

WHAT DID HE DO TO HER? I must know!

:) can i just plainly state i'm in love of the story already.

I cat wait for more

Sorry. I just saw an update and that was my immediate reaction. Now that I've actually read the update the comment can begin.
I kind of feel bad for Harry. Like. He ish had it coming but still, that doesn't mean it sucks any less. Actually. It probably sucks more to know that you deserve it....
Wonder is Louis is going to sneak off and visit Olivia....
Now I've gone to check the characters page and am kind of wondering who Wren is. Jk. I went back and checked (because I thought I knew it) and he's the guy who took over for her when her dad was in the hospital.
Which means that since he's in the characters page he's probably the one managing them for this tour. Which means Harry's going to have to remember last time they met and get upset.
And in weather related news, it's certainly a shitstorm of guilt and loneliness in Stylestown.
I tried to be clever but it's 2:30am and I can't. I apologize for that terrible joke, but I'm too lazy to edit it out now that I've written it.