20 Days of You - Comments

  • Moriarty;

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    Brian you evil little devil! Damn this story all I wanted to do was be in her position so badly! Though perhaps not in this chapter- I don't know how she survived that in front of everyone else! I can't wait for the next chapter!
    April 4th, 2013 at 09:00am
  • Synful Cocktail

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    Oh fucking wow that was so fucking hot and oh my god! I loved it AND BRIAN CALLED LUCY HIS GIRLFRIEND, yaaaaaY!
    April 4th, 2013 at 07:27am
  • headrushxreeta

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    Ohhhhh that was evil and hot and amazing!!!!!!! Oh!!!! I so love this story!!
    April 4th, 2013 at 06:55am
  • StacieIerogeance

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    Ohhhh thats so evil of brian
    April 4th, 2013 at 05:57am
  • Matt Sanders;

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    Well lets see, oh my gosh Brian!! i would be in total agony! God!! I have a feeling that...they will fall in love and I hope that it has a happy ending!
    April 4th, 2013 at 05:49am
  • bryanaa7x

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    This story man...Just makes my week soo much better!♥
    April 4th, 2013 at 04:41am
  • HanerJoy

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    OHH MY GOD!!! OH MY FUCKING GOD!!! I can't believe he did that!!!! lol and I can't believe how strong she was!!! I thought she was gonna end up screaming right there lol even tho' she doesn't want to break the rules of their contract, I can see her doing it, and they being together as a couple :)
    April 4th, 2013 at 04:13am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    Wow why is this story so amazing? I gotta say that I almost thought she was gonna end up screaming and drawing attention to herself for a moment hehe xD
    Can't wait for the next update!
    April 4th, 2013 at 03:00am
  • Hell-Cat

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    I forgot that the update was today! Best surprise ever! <3
    Best chapter yet!
    April 4th, 2013 at 02:18am
  • CharmedLuna

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    Where has this been all my life? haha. I just found it and so far I've only read the prologue but I love it already. I'll have to read the rest of it later. But this is so freaking good.
    April 3rd, 2013 at 09:03pm
  • DreamingCorpse

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    Oh my lord... I love this story so much! Oh sweet mama that is yummy. Mhm. So yummy. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
    April 2nd, 2013 at 10:05pm
  • bryanaa7x

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    Don't put so much pressure on yourself Hun. I love this story. I think its amazing!
    March 31st, 2013 at 01:10am
  • StacieIerogeance

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    I love this and yes she needs to stay with brian after the 20 days
    March 30th, 2013 at 05:51pm
  • HanerJoy

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    Lucy take the advice the girl said and hold on to him, and never let him go :) I can't wait to read more :D
    March 30th, 2013 at 03:57pm
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    You shouldnt feel pressured! Your writing is always amazing! And really, write for yourself and enjoyment, not for others!! Lol, Im totally not trying to sound preavhy, but yeah. This story is amazing and I dont think you give yourself enough credit!!! Like this chapter for instant...I really liked it, it was sexy, but still showed strong hints at the connection they have with each other. I cant wait for more:)
    March 30th, 2013 at 06:00am
  • heretic.

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    First of all, you don't suck. This was a mind blowing chapter! Well worth any wait! Brian being dominated. Phewyyyy! Hot hot hot!
    March 29th, 2013 at 02:24pm
  • foREVerTegan:D

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    This chapter was awesome cant wait for more Lucy must of had fun ;)
    March 29th, 2013 at 02:09pm
  • teenstar

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    You don't suck! That's not true. This chapter was great and I can't wait for the next one.
    I really want Lucy to be with Brian in a near future; they're such a lovely couple. And I wonder why there weren't any picture of his personal life in his house... Maybe we'll know it in the next chapters...
    March 29th, 2013 at 12:49pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    It was worth the wait! This story is great! Don't ever think you suck. I haven't been disappointed at all during any point in this story, and I know I'm not the only one who feels that way. :)

    This chapter was hot as hell. Just...wow. I don't know how you do it. <3
    March 29th, 2013 at 09:59am
  • Quoth Raven

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    You don't suck! This was a wonderful update! I can't wait for more!
    March 29th, 2013 at 09:37am