20 Days of You - Comments

Don't worry hun, because as always it was a wonderful chapter! Finally someone dominating Brian for once, I always figured he needed to learn how to be a Sub for once- probably why I wrote so much about it. But it's amazing chapter- you don't suck one little bit!

Daaaaaaaaaamn! That was hot! You shouldn't doubt yourself honey- you're an amazing writer and I love you and all of your stories!

I liked that chapter. And all the others so far! Don't doubt yourself. You are a fantastic writer! I can't wait to read what happens next :)

You are an amazing writer, never be worried about the chapters you put out! I absolutely love this story!

Don't put yourself down about your chapters, they're really good. Keep up the good work!!

Ok the noise I just made was not human. Wow!! You're killing me here!! I love this!

ohh shit that chapter was intense. Girl dont stop your amazingness:)

It's OK, you know, I didn't need my ovaries anyway, it's just fine...

Holy crap woman I think you're trying to kill me- this was so freaking hot! I can tell already, Brian's got a little crush on her! He keeps letting out his feelings to her, which is good- they need to get together already! I would say make them kiss but they've already passed that obstacle...also I agree with the person below, Brian is super fucking hot when he dominates. Just hnnnggg....I can't wait for the next update!

Great update :D
Brian sure getting attached to Lucy as well as Lucy getting atttached to him too. I would if lucy will take Brian's advice and break their rule and be together.
Gosh this chapter was amazing...Brian is so hot when he's dominate.

Holy shit this story is so good. I can't wait to read more of it and I could tell that brian is getting attached to lucy and lucy is getting attached to him adn they should just go past twenty days

"he lets out one of the most erotic cries I had ever heard. It took my breath away"

I actually groaned out loud when I read that bit! Hahaha

Oh my good god!!! Ovaries blown!! God dammit!! He wants her, she wants him. Make it happen!!! Haha

Break the rules dammit! I love it!

Brian, please break the rules! Lucy, agree to break the rules! Ugh, this is so perfect!

Brian wants to break the rules!! Brian wants to break the rules so let him breaks the rules and have a girlfriend for good. They both want it and I want it as a reader...

And I think he knows why she's different from other girls...

I think Brian wants her bad! He needs to grow some balls and just ask her to be his girlfriend, rules or no rules! Update soon please!

This story...oh my goodness oh my dayum! Thank you for writing this its seriously one of my favorites on this site now. Can't wait for the next, keep up the great work! :D

P.S. fuck the rules haha

AWWW BRIAN'S ATTACHED!! AWW AWWW AWWW!
This chapter was a perfect mix of smutty goodness and cuteness! I loved it so much!

Uh oh. I sense that they are going to try to extend their, umm, "relationship." Or Brian will. Maybe she'll be able to turn him down, but she's falling for him so hard that walking away is going to hurt her. I don't see this ending well for either of them.

Brian is VERY attached to her. I really like this, Lucy should just start to let go. I can't wait for the next update!

Brian is so getting attached to her. I agree with @HanerJoy that they are going to part their ways in love with each other and that is not good D: