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  • Jordan;:

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    Looooove this! Keep writing lovely, you're amazing and creative! :D
    February 9th, 2013 at 09:47pm
  • CharlieHunnam

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    holy crow, woman. that was a seriously hot chapter. GOOD GRAVY.
    February 9th, 2013 at 01:30am
  • teenstar

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    That was a great chapter. I want more Very Happy
    February 8th, 2013 at 09:59am
  • Hell-Cat

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    SWEET BABY JESUS THIS IS GREAT!
    February 7th, 2013 at 06:05pm
  • Moriarty;

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    So fucking hot! Damn woman, this is driving me crazy!
    February 7th, 2013 at 08:47am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Oh yeah. That was fucking HOT!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it! And I know she's going to continue to pry. Journalists can't help themselves. I'm curious all the time...and I majored in Journalism. Lol. :)
    February 7th, 2013 at 07:01am
  • Synful Cocktail

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    Oh Lordy, I need a moment to myself! Hooooooot.

    Awwww! I think there should be a chapter in Brian's perspective or something because I can tell he's developing feelings for her and vice versa. XD
    February 7th, 2013 at 06:16am
  • HanerJoy

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    Ummm Yeahhhh just like amodernmyth88 I'm asking myself if I did the right decision of reading this before bed lol Damnn this was HOOOOT!!! I want a Brian :( I can't say Brian's falling for her like she is falling for him, but he is definitely having feelings for her. And I want her journalist to take over her :D I want to know more lol who the fuck would cheat on him??? O.O
    February 7th, 2013 at 05:29am
  • headrushxreeta

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    Uh Ohhhhh, hitting a nerve with Mr. Brian. I'm sure he'll come around eventually. Especially after that scene. Good lord, that was some hot stuff! You are too good at this,I cannot wait to see what happens next!!!!
    February 7th, 2013 at 05:12am
  • foREVerTegan:D

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    Wow that was very interesting ;) can't wait for more :D
    February 7th, 2013 at 02:29am
  • heretic.

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    Jesus Christ mother mary on a bike!! That was so damn hot! Can't wait for next weeks installment!
    February 7th, 2013 at 02:17am
  • A7X-PapaRoachLvr

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    I absolutely love this so far!
    February 7th, 2013 at 02:05am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    She has never even masturbated before? Wowza!!! I'm a pretty sexual person by nature so that was shocking! I have to say I found this very hot!!! Brian is just so...crazy sexy in this. Lol. It's sad that he seems to be damaged goods though. And her, falling for him already and it's only day three... Uh oh! I fear somebody has bitten off more than theycan chew, I just haven't figured out which one of them it is yet. Loved this:)
    February 7th, 2013 at 01:16am
  • Quoth Raven

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    Though I know he doesn't want to talk about it, I want her inner journalist to pop out again too lol
    February 7th, 2013 at 12:32am
  • helena_88

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    woahh.. did i make the right choice by reading this just before going to bed?? or should i have waited until morning and read it while having coffee?? Mr. Green damn if that chapter doesn't get my mind to have crazy dreams then I don't know what will Mr. Green

    this story is frickin' hot and naughty that's for sure Mr. Green
    can't wait to find out what he'll teach her next Cool
    February 6th, 2013 at 11:37pm
  • headrushxreeta

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    Wow. You are too good. Way too good. I love how descriptive you are; it was like while I was reading this, I felt everything Lucy felt, completely understood it and everything! And I love how you make Brian in this, sexy and super confident, hot! Ok so loving this story and I get super excited when I see that it's updated!
    February 1st, 2013 at 01:57am
  • heretic.

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    Wow! Ok I need more! haha.
    January 31st, 2013 at 09:09pm
  • teenstar

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    That was a great chapter. I love the fact that she is bold with Brian. He must not be used to that with girls and something tells me that he actually likes it very much. Can't wait for next week and next chapter
    January 31st, 2013 at 11:47am
  • Moriarty;

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    Hot damn! I cannot actually wait until she finally gets what she wants- cause to be honest, who wouldn't want to be in her shoes? Now I've got to wait till next Wednesday...I'll be counting down the days!
    January 31st, 2013 at 08:46am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    The sexual tension in this is so hot!!!! I love everything about this story. Brian sounds so friggin sexy and yes, dominant! It's great. He's so confident and alluring, lol. Can't help but wish I was the leading lady, she's getting all the goods. Loved the whole scenario with the silver balls. Sneaky Haner and his sexual prowess. Yum. I can't wait for more!
    January 31st, 2013 at 08:03am