Change of Plans - Comments

  • SweetSiDney1017

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    I don't know how people are not figuring out it's a merlin fic. In the summary you can tell by the characters at least if you know merlin. It's been awhile since I saw it but Gwaine was my favorite character and I could see this happening. Anything could happen with some of the plot twists.
    December 1st, 2014 at 08:25pm
  • leprechaun_katt

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    {Comment Swap - Please comment on The Girl Who Made A Choice}

    Just realized this was a Merlin fan fiction in the first chapter, but I do wish you could have done a better summary to explain what is going on and what will be going on. You could put up a layout which would draw the reader in a lot more because it didn't quite give me jazz at first.

    There are some grammar and spelling mistakes but we all do that, but you could go back and edit it as much as you can.

    Other than that, I've subscribed because I hope you will make it very interesting for me :)

    - Hannah X
    January 21st, 2013 at 09:11pm
  • livetoloveexx

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    @ Nerdybird123
    Cool! Please let me know what you think.
    January 14th, 2013 at 08:36pm
  • Johnny Ringo

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    @ livetoloveexx
    Awsome, I will totally read it. :D
    January 14th, 2013 at 08:26pm
  • livetoloveexx

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    @ Nerdybird123
    Oh my gosh! Thank you so much for commenting! I feel like no one ever sees my stuff on here. I am so glad you like it. This has sorta been my pet project for the last three months :P I am so obsessed with Merlin it isn't even an obsession anymore! I need a new word to describe it. I am really glad you like the Morgana angle. I think she is an awesome character and so many people shut her out once she became evil and totally forgot about the way she was before all that.

    I actually finished the story yesterday and have it all posted on my other website if you are interested in finishing it. I generally use that site more often. http://figment.com/books/438121-Change-of-Plans- Mr. Green
    January 14th, 2013 at 12:57pm
  • Johnny Ringo

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    I freaking love Merlin, and I like this because it kind of gives a different view point to Morgana's situation. Very good stuff ^~^ keep updating! :)
    January 14th, 2013 at 01:12am