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  • DeficientlyObscure

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    Sorry for the multiple comment, mibba seems to be having some issues. lol
    June 27th, 2014 at 06:53am
  • DeficientlyObscure

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    Okay so now I've read this one too and I'm about to read the sequel and then probably more of your stories because they are giving me inspiration to hopefully update some of mine, I like your style a lot. I am happy that her and Liam got a happy ending.
    June 27th, 2014 at 06:52am
  • DeficientlyObscure

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    Okay so now I've read this one too and I'm about to read the sequel and then probably more of your stories because they are giving me inspiration to hopefully update some of mine, I like your style a lot. I am happy that her and Liam got a happy ending.
    June 27th, 2014 at 06:52am
  • kind of perfect

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    So, I'm really late to this party (I actually read what you've written so far of the sequel first, and then went back and read this one over the last two days), but I just need to say that this really wrecked all my emotions. This is a really depressing, beautiful, and all-around great story.
    December 8th, 2013 at 08:30pm
  • Peroxide Princess.

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    I just now got caught up!! Sorry that it took me so long! But I love it! It's absolutely perfect! I'm sooooo happy Liam went to rehab, he definitely needed the help. And I'm glad that she left and did her own thing, she needed that too. But I'm ecstatic that they have a happy ending! I love, love, love, love, love, LOVE it! :) I can't wait to start reading the sequel! :D
    August 5th, 2013 at 06:20am
  • Caitlynnnn

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    i dont think you know how happy i am now that i know that there is a sequal!!! >:)
    i loved this story so much!!
    August 1st, 2013 at 03:54am
  • Lo_east

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    This is really such a good story. I'm so happy with the way it turned out.
    July 31st, 2013 at 11:05pm
  • Zen Molek

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    Aww. I can't believe it's over. :(
    This was one of my favorite stories for a while!
    I'm reaaaaally going to miss it!!
    July 31st, 2013 at 06:18pm
  • lovemehugmetrustme

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    Killing me. Killing me. Killing me. I love this.
    July 17th, 2013 at 10:17am
  • Lo_east

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    Guess who had to read this before the flight attendant told her to shut her phone off
    July 6th, 2013 at 12:18pm
  • Zen Molek

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    Aww. I really want them to be together :((
    July 5th, 2013 at 04:44am
  • She was the muse;

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    Yes sequel!!!
    June 30th, 2013 at 10:27pm
  • plamzdog

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    YES TO THE SEQUEL!!! UPDATE SOON XOX
    June 27th, 2013 at 03:50am
  • JayCaffrey

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    THIS IS BRILLIANT UPDATE PLEASE
    June 26th, 2013 at 02:44am
  • Lo_east

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    Sequel yes!!!!!! And this needs to get happy now!
    June 25th, 2013 at 04:07pm
  • lovelyacoustic

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    I am SO interested in a sequel!!! I love this story, and I love your writing, and I love everything thank you for making me so happy!!! This chapter was a legit awkward situation that would happen in real life. I loved every second of it!! Thank you, again, for being so good at writing!!!!
    June 25th, 2013 at 07:13am
  • ShayDay

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    Please update soon
    June 22nd, 2013 at 02:05pm
  • lovelyacoustic

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    I loved it. I have tears in my eyes.

    As much as I love them together, seeing him fake it and feeling the pressure of being the only thing keeping him together would have me do the same thing Jade did. It's heartbreaking, but very realistic, and VERY much needed. Maybe they can meet again after Liam goes to rehab and Jade finishes her book tour. :)
    June 21st, 2013 at 06:51pm
  • viralstorm

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    I do agree with her. I really feel like Liam needs to step away and get some help. It is not normal to run away from your problems and then return, only to drink yourself into stupor. Not to mention he just kept acting like everything was fine, even though it most definitely is not. I really feel like he needs to want to be okay, for himself. If you don't care about yourself, you will have more trouble caring for others. No one is that selfless. Not even the wonderful Liam Payne.

    This was still very sad, but I am so proud of her for doing the right thing. Update soon!
    June 8th, 2013 at 05:24pm
  • mlikesbands

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    please update soon!
    June 8th, 2013 at 03:04am