Beneath Your Perfect - Comments

I JUST NEED MORE. MORE MORE MORE.

She needs to cancel the book. It's the only way she will be able to fix her and Liam. Mostly, it's the only way to fix Liam. I didn't want him to return to alcohol!! That killed me, as it did Jade. I wish she could make it less about him.

I think she should go. She and Liam should have one more talk within those three days, but I want her to go. This has been her dream and hopefully her time away will help Liam decide how much he really loves her and misses her. I want her to go and for Liam to forgive her, but I love a little more drama between them. Their relationship may seem so torn apart and unfixable but if they both honestly love each other that much then they will get over their problems soon. Please update soon cause the story is getting too good!

She shouldn't go and Liam should fix things cuz she obviously didn't mean to hurt him

I'm so torn!! I want her to go cause it is what she has been working for but then here and Liam are so cute together and awwwww ;_;

I hope he does forgive her, like really sooooooon!!!

I love this story. Love you. Love Liam and Jade. 'Nuff said.

I hope that she can talk to him soon and they come up with some sort of agreement together. They're so cute!

This is so amazing! I read it all in one sitting, please update soon! This is possibly the best Liam story I've read! :)

Meh moreee! Fix it! Please

I can't wait for the next update!! So excited!!! :D

Just started reading the book today and its amazing! But why did you have to leave me hanging like that!!!!! Sigh. I really love this book! Can't wait till the next update! (:

No!!! Why would you give us such a sad chapter and then tell us that the story is coming to a close!?!?? My heart is aching! :( but this was amazing and I want to hug them both. I love how snappy Eleanor was. She got straight to business and didn't spare her feelings. Sometimes people really need that!

I really don't wanna see this go! It's so fantastic, I won't be able to say goodbye!

This is just perfection. I have a Liam story, too if you wanna check it out.
I love to hear from my fellow Liam lovers. :p
But I hope you update this ASAP!

It's so good!
I don't even know what to expect next! I'm kind of hoping she doesn't publish it, just so that she can show Liam how much she really does love him. But I know whatever you choose to write is going to be great!

Both sides make valid points. I think it shouldn't be published because he is such a public figure. It hurts him and his fans might not read the end of the book because they'll be pissed at her for divulging too much information, or get the wrong idea and think Liam's actually done all of that. I don't think she should publish it, but then again, we don't know the ending.

Noo, he should have bkew up. And I hate how shes trying to flip it saying it's not "him" when it is.

I like that Liam blew up about the book. I read some of the comments, and the people who want them both to relax and forgive each other aren't looking at this realistically. I understand that this is fanfiction and therefore by definition not particularily realistic, but I want them to fight and not immediately make up. Honestly, if I was Liam, I wouldn't finish the book and then I would sue Jade for defamation of character because he would probably win in a court of law.

This is very well written and I appreciate your realistic character development. I also appologise for the overuse of the word "realistic" in this comment.

Aww my poor babies!!
I think they both should have been more understanding about each others sides! They could have reached a nice compromise! I hope things get fixed soon. They're too cute to be apart from each other! ;_;

I think shes wrong. I just hope they don't break up. I love them them together too much.

I LOVE this story sooo much :) I check my emails all the time just to see if you have updated this story. I am seriously not ashamed to admit that I am hopelessly addicted to Beneath Your Perfect <3 You write so well and your characters are so believable. Your plot is really interesting and you always leave me wanting to read more.
Please update soon, my heart is racing and I NEED to know what happens.
Please never stop writing <3