Beneath Your Perfect - Comments

ERMAGERD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you have no idea how many feels i got during this! <3 <3 <3 <3 LIAM PAYNE MARRY ME!! he deserves so much better than that! how could dani do that?! it pisses me freaking OFF! and he just CONTINUED to be a gentleman, he's freaking PERFECT! despite his crumbling, he was so strong. he's building himself back up again, and jade is helping him so much. i sincerely hope that he stops thinking that he needs to be who he was, and instead becomes stronger from what he's been through. he can start to trust the fans a bit more, and the paps can always go to you know where, but liam doesn't need to be the perfect specimen of man that he was before. he can just be him, and that's an improvement from who he was because now he's learned first hand what the world can do to him and his loved ones. he'll protect them better now, and with jade he'll learn that not everything is his fault.

i freaking love them
i freaking love this story
THANK YOU! <3 <3 <3 <3

no me gusta!! her thoughts at the end, no me gusta!!!!! i understand and agree completely, but she can still be with him to help him get through his problems. maybe they can just be friends with the promise of being together once he gets better. then their reunion would be so deliciously sweet! <3 <3

i wonder what she's writing about now! i hope it's not liam. :\

please add more soon, i love this!!

Sweet Jesus don't make them break up ill cry

Just caught up on the last two chapters and maaaan. Intense past jades got there. Looks like he's not the only one with a dark past! But glad they could be honest about things. They're so damn cute. And the last part of the last chapter makes me nervous! I hope that her concerns don't make him pull away!

This was heavy! Jade's past is so dark, and I really want Liam to fight her ex!!! That'd be so good, for everyone involved. As long as Liam didn't get hurt, and he didn't get any bad publicity for it. (; This story is SO GOOD!!! I cannot wait for the next addition!

Another amazing chapter as always. I love this history about Jade!

THE BEST STORY ON MIBBA RIGHT NOW IF YOU DON'T UPDATE EVERY DAY IM GOING O DIE

I can't wait for the next update! So excited to see where this goes! Keep up the great work(:

i really hope he doesnt hurt her. not after all that shes been through. but this was so good.

Loving this new story!!! So good!

i do love them!! i'm glad they're giving liam a chance. and i'm glad that liam is being so good to her!! i feel like there is a whole BOATLOAD of foreshadowing with everyone being so wary of his ability to hurt her. just sayin'!!

ahh this was so cute! i loved the ending with the two of them standing at his car. cant wait for the next update!

Ughhhh so adorable!! I just want them to kiss already damnit! I'm glad they're starting to like him. I am on edge though like Liam can do something/anything wrong and everything will jus blow up!

So much god damn cutness! I wish they would kiss already. Even though he hasn't said anything yet.

This is the best story I've read in a while, I can't wait for more posts! Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please

This honestly is my favorite story on Mibba right now!! I absolutely adore it. More please! xx

Oh Liam!! :( it's gonna be okay baby! Just give it time!!! <3 dude, jade gave some pretty great advice back there. She's so positive and reassuring, I want someone like her in my life!!! :D

i absolutely love this story so much! this chapter was so cute. i hate waiting for you to post chapters hahahahah. im so impatient

I love this story sooooo much, I kind of want to just stop reading it and wait until you post it all so i can just sit down and read it back to back so I don't have to wait for a next chapter or or oooorrrr you can just post it all ;) haha jk but asjdghaklsdgja this was such a cute chapter like awww i love this Liam and it's so cute that they're giving it a real try!! please please pleaaase update again sooooon! x

i like really love this story! there sooo cute!!!!<3 yay cuteness!