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  • celestial_royalty

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    Very well, you're off the hook- this time. I skimmed over the last few chapters- I'm tired and the layout is burning my eyes. It's been torture trying to keep them open and force them to stare at this computer screen with the blinding white on black. I was quite satisfied with what she did with 'Camille' but didn't see why the woman didn't immediately register with Lizzy as Camille. Did she look different? It would, however, be much more satisfying if she did that to Samael. He absolutely has it coming. The question is, what to do to Abbadon? This story reminds me of 'Gabriel' which starred Andy Whitfield. Is that where you got the idea?
    August 24th, 2014 at 11:08am
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    12- if you seriously kill Brian again, you are going to be a DEAD WRITER, you hear me?! And I am not talking about zombies either! Or vampires! Jeez why are you making me send you death threats? Don't make me out to be the bad guy here, because YOU are the one who keeps threatening to kill Brian. Give the poor guy a break!
    August 24th, 2014 at 10:49am
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    Awwwwwwh.. I love this so much! It's so wonderfully written and I just adore it so much! (Well, with what I've read so far)

    I love the idea of Nephilim and angels.
    April 25th, 2013 at 02:06am
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    I freakin love this story!!!!! My heart hurt when I thought Brian was dead!!!

    As for suggestions.. I think Zacky should take Samael up on his offer, it's not like they have much of a choice really. I agree with Gothique with the Brian/Elizabeth love being strong enough to kill Abaddon.

    Maybe Zacky and Elizabeth could channel the whole "descendant of an arch angel" vibe together through their mind?
    March 31st, 2013 at 01:48am
  • gothique4

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    Damn Abaddon does sound he looks like Brian a bit. Holy hell that thing is creepy.

    I wouldn't trust Samael at all but they probably don't have much choice as he can get them back there to launch a rescue effort.

    Abaddon may be strong but Brian's love for Elizabeth may be enough for him to rip Abaddon apart.

    I'd love to see Elizabeth work on her powers a bit, as it would be ironic if she was the one who ripped Abaddon apart, as it's something the sleazy creep wouldn't be expecting.
    January 5th, 2013 at 01:48am
  • helena_88

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    ya know my first thought when i read about what abbaddon(?) looked like was Brian Mr. Green couldn't help it- i was like huh? don't tell me that his father or something like that Mr. Green now that's a plot-twist.. hahah

    he is evil.. that's for sure though.. and creepy as hell..!! kinda makes my skin crawl.. not in a good way either..

    samael.. is he serious right now or just playin some sick game again? i mean did he really think that he would be free?? hahahahahahha stupid f*cker Mr. Green *ahem*

    ooh let shadows loose on his face.. now that would be fun.. Mr. Green
    January 4th, 2013 at 10:12pm
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    oh my god you evil woman you made me think that Brian was dead!!!!!

    I hate seeing Elizabeth so broken, but at least she's still showing defiance to that asshole Samael

    Ooh hell yes I agree with Brian's sentiment - I want to see Samael ripped apart as well.

    Ugh even Camille was a demon too :-( I have to admit I smirked when I read how Elizabeth broke all her bones. Bitch deserved it.

    Wow, Samael got a little bit rattled that Elizabeth is powerful enough to wield power over him. I hope she uses it to her advantage again.

    Love the pic - Zacky is standing so stiffly he looks like he's in a mug shot :p
    December 20th, 2012 at 11:12pm
  • helena_88

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    ya know i kind of didn't want to read this chapter..........
    BUT HOLY SHIT WAS I GLAD THAT I DID!!

    HAPPY TEARS GIRLY!! THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT Mr. Green
    He's not dead.. he's not dead.. he's not dead
    *happy dancing around the room*

    i love that she is much stronger than the fucker realize, that she can toy with his mind like he does hers Mr. Green

    i really hope that they somehow get through to her, to let her know that bri is still alive..

    or that they hurry their asses to the underworld along with tuck and shaddix so bri can be reunited with his love <3

    i'm a happy cookie again Mr. Green
    December 20th, 2012 at 11:03pm
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    @ gothique4
    if i've made both you and @amodernmyth88 cry then i have been successful in what i wanted to happen in this chapter....
    samael ain't gonna torture her body...its her mind that he's after!
    December 18th, 2012 at 03:06am
  • gothique4

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    oh my god you made me cry woman. I was hoping that there was some way to save Brian, but then Samael went and broke his neck :-(

    Oh damn, I want to flay Samael and Caym alive for what they've done, though I did a slight twinge of satisfaction when she flung Samael across the room. He's had his pride wounded now, so she's probably going to cop a fair bit of torture for besting him :-(
    December 17th, 2012 at 10:56pm
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    @ purple89
    hahah yeah, i've tried that she doesn't even comment on my stories.. sometimes she can say something on FB or if i meet her but.. yeah.. she's lazy Mr. Green
    December 17th, 2012 at 10:47pm
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    if it makes you feel better i shed a few tears writing this chapter.....its really sad...
    i'll take a gold star thank you very much and please...i have rat traps for hell hounds....bwahahahahahaha......yo should tell yur friend to comment......comments are good....hahahahahaha
    December 17th, 2012 at 09:58pm
  • helena_88

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    ya know.. i have a HARD FRICKING TIME SEEING THROUGH MY TEARS ATM!!! that was just pure evil my friend.. extremely well written but just pure evil.. i don't actually think anyone before this has got me to sob this much with just one chapter...!! so that deserves a medal or gold star Mr. Green

    samael.. damn i hate him more than vengeance in 24, and that's sayin something.. well, to be fair vengeance hasn't killed brian.. gah!! i wanna rip him to pieces.. that god for nothing fucking scum.. Mr. Green at least he got his ass a bit roughed up.. (uhm not in THAT way)

    not gonna comment the death scene, that'll just make me cry all over again..

    caym.. can i please torture that maggot?? Mr. Green

    i wanna hug the boys <3 they're so so sad Sad

    even if this upset me to no end, i still love it to the moon and back Mr. Green

    and yes, i copy and paste the prev. comment into word counter just for the fun of it.. didn't know about this story until you mentioned it in the a/n for 24.. got a friend of mine to read it aswell.. she loves it too, she's just not good at leaving comments.. Cool

    oh AND if there's a scratching sound on your door late at night, don't worry it's just the hell hounds... Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green
    December 17th, 2012 at 08:47pm
  • gothique4

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    I love this chapter but damn what the hell happened and how the hell did they get Elizabeth??? :-(

    I love the guys to death in this chapter. I laughed at Jimmy being a major cockblocker, and then not having coffee on top of it hahahaha

    That is so cool that they all have their different powers, although Johnny's probably got to be the smallest tiger in the world :p

    Oh no, the demon's poison has got to Brian :-( Oh man, I hope that he can be healed before it's too late.
    December 16th, 2012 at 12:11am
  • purple89

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    you counted the amount of words in your comment woman!!!!!! did you copy and paste into word just to check??!!!!! i love love love your comments!!!! but you know that already.....can u believe that i put this story up for almost 5 months and got 1 comment in that entire time (and like 9 readers)...but i changed the name and all that changed....woot woot.....btw....im getting a banner done on 24 by sevenfoldgirl_ so check it out....:)
    December 15th, 2012 at 10:57pm
  • helena_88

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    205 words 1317 characters.. must be a record?? Mr. Green
    December 15th, 2012 at 10:51pm
  • helena_88

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    okay okay okay... first off, before i start ranting..
    “How’d you know it was me?” questioned Jimmy in the same high pitched voice. <----- so fricking adorable!!!
    okay.. right.. back to point..

    YOU CANNOT START A CHAPTER LIKE THAT AND GO BACK 3 DAYS AND NOT GET US TO POINT IN THIS I'M DYING OVER HERE.. O_o BRI IS GONE?? SHE'S TAKEN?? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

    *deep breath*

    soooo.. jimmy was just totally adorable and the biggest cock-blocker.. and didn't bring coffee..

    johnny can turn himself into animals?? aaawh!!

    jimmy got his emotion control thing, love that he tried to make matt laugh like crazy Mr. Green

    zee got that superduper frickin' speed and strenght thingy going..

    matt can make you see things, but something tells me there's more to it? since samael thought something about their powers in the start of this if i'm not wrong?? that they didn't fully know what he could do??

    bri can control elements.. that's kinda bad-ass Mr. Green

    and i'm going to have nightmares tonight, not knowing whatta hell happened after bri collapsed...

    and this has been one hell of a long comment, again.. i swear, it's your stories fault Mr. Green <3
    i just go nuts Cool

    *loved the chapter as always*
    December 15th, 2012 at 10:49pm
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    This story is amazing!!! Seriously, I can't wait for the next update :D
    December 14th, 2012 at 11:01am
  • helena_88

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    seriously woman you've got my emotions on a frickin rollercoaster ride with this story..
    Matt talking with Lizzy almost had me crying..
    shocked when she threw him with her mind..
    goosebumps all over when she got her wings and zee was completely healed..
    happy and smiling at that and then angry and teary eyed when the bastard samael turned up and GAH! Brian!! O_o
    i wanna jump into this story and kick samael's scrawny ass Mr. Green
    December 12th, 2012 at 10:18am
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    @ gothique4
    funny thing...i be singing dear god in my head while attempting to study for a GODDAMN STRATEGIC MANAGEMENT EXAM!!! damn lecturer is eviiiilllll...day before uni close for vacation and he's the only one giving us this crap.....i'm attempting to focus....grrrrrrrr....
    Matt as hulk...bwahahhahahaha
    December 12th, 2012 at 02:57am
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