Darkness Eternal - Comments

I love the first line - I'm sitting in my office eating lunch and now singing Dear God to myself :-)

Awww poor Matty :-( Elizabeth is right though - they all need him to be strong as he's like their unofficial leader. Thank god that she managed to heal him, though she damn near managed to then bust his head open lol. She must have super strong powers to be able to throw the Hulk around like a rag doll :p

Yay, Zacky's healed but damn that Samael for showing up again and now he's poisoned Brian :-(

@ gothique4
Asmodeus the cross dresser..thats hilarious!!!! actually in my readings, that particular demon can take any form...so i guess he chose to be a red headed vixen....ahhahahah

oh damn poor poor Zacky :-( How could those bastards have ripped his wing off :-(

I didn't pick Asmodeus as a cross-dresser :-/ That was just a little creepy lol

At least Elizabeth now knows who Shane really is, but the guys really do have to sit her down and tell her everything before anything else happens

@ purple89
yeap i cried, i actually like zee in this story.. compared to 23 & 24
okay now i'm scared.. which one of my boys are you going to hurt or even kill off next?? O_o heheheh

@ amodernmyth88
cry? you cried...awww..here's a tissue..keep it...don't want it back...lol....yup ELizabeth now knows about Shane which is good..but get prepared for a even more bumpy ride....and i have a feeling you're going to want to jump through the computer and kill me when you read the next few chapters....

WOMAN YOU MADE ME CRY!!
Gah!!
I just.. I.. why did he have to rip zee's wing off??
it started off so good with her graduation.. Matt being all cute with the bow thing instead of hug.. johnny kiss on the cheek..
and then samael and caym turned up outside the apartment and Ya just knew that trouble was coming.. Asmodeus as a woman, now that's kinky.. lmao! poor zee got tricked.. and kicked.. and ripped.. (sorry couldn't help myself there)
the cat is out of the bag now though with the nasty creatures outside of the club and then the whole thing with zee.. i'm glad that izzy now knows that shane is samael, and that he is a fucking prick that needs to die
i hope the healer can heal zee <3

@ gothique4
read it!! 50 shades is pretty good. there's some debate over her writing style and in my opinion it gets kind of annoying at times but generally pretty good. Try to not think of sparkly gay vamps...i really tried that and it worked..for the most part...

I'm not surprised that Shane isn't game to show his face at her graduation now that he knows that the guys are back. Very interested to see what Caym does.

Oh good lord, Zacky!!!!! I don't think he'll go in there again without knocking hahahahaha

I haven't read 50 Shades yet and now I've got an image of a sparkly gay vampire and probably won't want to read it lol

heheheheh samael is in trouble!! moahahah
ooh zee and the others doesn't know that lizzy has been spending time with him?? uh.oh!!

GOD DAMN IT ZACKY YOU STUPID, EVER HEARD OF KNOCKING ON A CLOSED DOOR?? LMFAO!!
poor lizzy and brian, talk about cock-blocker!! or orgasm-blocker more like it.. *giggles* they're just super cute together <3

50 shades, christian is based on edward?? oh hell no!! that totally ruined it i've read book 1 & 2, started on book 3 a while back.. damn.. edward=YUCK!! i've been imagining Tom Hiddleston while reading, thanks to the red-brown-ish hair and blue eyes <3

Love love love this

Samael.. damn she keeps meeting him
aawh so cute that she puts everyone before herself..

“I missed you” he said softly into her hair. He looked towards the rest of his friends who all seemed preoccupied with whatever happened to be closest to them. He smiled when saw Jimmy holding an oven mitt close to his face.

LMAO!! that was just the most adorable.. oven mitt.. <3 jimbo you cute motherf*cker

they came home for her graduation <3 And jimbo helped her fall asleep..

THEY KISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSED!!!!!!!!!!

I love love love this story...read 23 and 24 and this one is such an interesting change. Down to your writing style changed and its really engaging. I love your character development as well and your dialogue is witty and generally fantasic. This is some of mibba's finest. Can't wait to read more. Zacky is super sweet in this and I love how protective Matt is. You have such a way with words.

awwww yay the guys have come back for her graduation!!!!!! Damn Shane/Samael is ingratiating himself more and more into her life and if he's going to be at the graduation I can see a major showdown with the guys.

I agree with amodernmyth88 - I she doesn't become smitten with Shane and forget about her feelings for Brian

aawhs and teary eyes.. that last part of chap.6.. can i have brian for real?? i mean it's almost x-mas and *swoons* damn that man.!! he def. are sex in jeans.. and prince charming on a harley <3
i hope zee wont be mad if/when he finds out about their feelings for each other, if he doesn't already know that is..

ugh! she went and met with shane.. *pouts* thinking of her feelings for brian i sure hope that she doesn't go and get smitten by the bastard samael... coz then i'll smack some sence into her lol!!

and yes, i love this more and more with each chapter <3 you really know how to write in a way that makes the reader want moooooore <3

chap.5
HOLY FRICKIN MOLY!! now that was awesome!! Matt's powers seem scary and awesome at the same time, he's just totally bad-ass!!

moahahahah Shane got his ass handled to him, talk about his plan sucking bad!! he hurt Brian though, the bastard!

Liz dreamed about Bri.. aawh!! adorable!! i wonder when and how she'll find out what she truly are.. and her having similar powers as Matt, just that she doesn't know about it? that's cool!!

samael, don't start a war already.. lol..

runs to chap6

well.. since there's 3 new chapters since last time i commented, i'm gonna leave one new comment for each chapter when i've read it.. moahahahh :)

ch4. lipstick and sharpie drawings on the guys.. now that is funny!!! hahahah!! and mean :P
loved that brian made her run through away from him and the hugging and stuff- so sweet and then jimmy just comes and ruins the moment.. lmfao!! not surprised that jimbo was the one that didn't get mad AT ALL for the sharpie and lipstick, i think he would've done exactly the same thing in that situation, if not something 10 times worse :D (runs to chap5)

I can't believe I hadn't seen this before either. it is absolutely amazing and I just love the whole plot!

Shane/Samael is an absolute bastard and Caym ain't much better. He just sounds revolting.

I love the guys - Jimmy is just Jimmy, and is adorable as all get out. I love how protective Matt is of Lizzy - he's like a huge angry teddy bear with a soft core :-)

Can't wait to read more :-)

@ amodernmyth88 you should know by now how much i love love love your comments!!!!!! if you ever listened to the band cradle of filth then caym is sooo danny filth...creepy and kinda sexy but still creepy...and shane/samael...i always pictured like adam goniter...teehee....and we get some serious brian/elizabeth lovin later on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well i'll be damned!! Why didn't i see this one earlier?? holy cow! can it get better?? I mean, A7X mixed with supernatural creatures and nephilim(?) at that.. yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! totally awesome first 3 chapters <3

don't know what to think about shane/samael, well he is kinda evil but something tells me that Liz will make him change...

Caym: that dude.. *shivers* i imagined him like a snake when i read this.. lmao!! dunno why.. i just do not like him i have a feeling that he will keep making trouble..

the boys.. well.. what can I say about them?? they're just awesome already <3
Johnny being a grump.. Brian just *sighs*.. Jimmy being the adorable one as always.. Zacky, surprise I don't wanna kill him in this story he seems awesome and Matt.. Anger issues and just protective <3

can't wait for more! and i have no idea what it is but your stories just makes me leave the longest frickin' comments known to man...