My Sweeny Todd - Comments

Poor Devin. He can't give up yet

Oh no

Nooo! But let the plotting begin...I hunt you down and kidnap you, then high-jack a plane and we go to Europe, then I force you to tell me the ending.

Don't make us wait! I want to know what happens next!!:O

@ ElegantFalcon

Answers will be revealed once the sequel rolls around ;D

How can he be dead? She needs him alive. Or did he fake his death? You can't make us wait, we have to know. Please?

The layout for this story is simply beautiful while being easy on the eyes. The title captured my attention, and the description is intriguing.

There were a few grammatical errors that I'd like to note. I think you should go back and correct the way you end your dialogues. Commas should replace periods in cases like this: You're going to turn out as his little whore" she snapped.

I saw some cases where my was written as me, and stared was written as started.

Besides the small grammar problems, I really like your story. I hope you much success on it. <3

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I'm only on the first chapter and already its off to a very good start. I like the title, its interesting and draws the reading in; just like the summary. You're very descriptive and you have a really good writing flow, I cannot wait to read the rest of it

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

@ ElegantFalcon
Not telling ;) y'all have to wait

What is this unexplainable thing? I must know!

@ ElegantFalcon
Writing it now!!!!!!!

I want the next chapter now

@ PTVTea
Writing the next chapter right now :)

Devin and her need to be together update asap

@ TheRockshowChick

Devin went to his room and is trying to grow a pair :D

Where's Devin!?!? I really want Moonlight and Devin to be together already!!!! Devin better grow some balls already! Update soon :)

Wait...where did Devin go? What's going to happen now?

Ooooo, I think Ricky is starting to like her!!:O