A Voice for Tom - Comments

oh god....

Oh dear. Oh no, oh no, oh dear.

Christine is such a slutty little bitch. I want to kill her.

And now Bill's probably going to get it. Oh dear god.

*hands Bill an ice pack*

God knows he'll need it.

O.O DAMN! BILL'S SCREWED!!

Oh my god. Update, woman!

I KNEW IT! I KNEW THAT WOULD HAPPEN!
Oh, man, that's gotta suck like no other.
Poor Bill. ):

And even more, poor Tom!

Oh come on! I hate cliffhangers! XD

More soon, I hope! I want to know what happens!

I swear, I have no idea why I can't picture Bill and Tom as eighteen in this!

I see them as like Rette Mich era twins.

Maybe it's the high school thing. I don't know.

*goes away after random fact spouting*

wowO_O
again
most............sexually disgusting as ever
your so good at this stuff aren't you..........?
i couldn't read the last part
it was too...........much for me -<_<-
nice work
your always good at the junk

cute

hot update go tomi!!

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I love how Tom totally kicked Trent's ass down the slopes. Like WHAT NOW

And yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay they did it ^______^

Oh god that was wonderful, with the coldness and the wonderfulness and yay =]

Good job babe

You updated!

And I loved the chapter. It was adorable. So they ended up getting each other the same gift, huh?

Finally updated x]

Aw, the Christmas gift thing was so sweet. I loved that. And YUS GAISEX. I was wondering when they'd get around to it. Then again, in my fic it's ch. 25 and I still haven't even really hinted at sex, so I can't be telling you off, haha.

I still love this. It's amazing. I love the way it's written. Just...wow.

Haha, Trent can go break both his arms and both his legs. But when I was reading that, I was thinking, "They'll be in the house kissing and then the police will burst in and take Tom away and be like, 'this boy is being arrested on count of murder-er, I mean, pushing a small boy down a slope' " or something equally odd XD

Wow, this was absolutely beautifully written. I loved it.

It was...amazing, to put it into one word.

Gahhh...I actually like Christine right now. That's annoying. I heard Billa's dad come home, and I was like, "Holy shit, here we go."

Then she was all, "Billy was just teaching me self-defense" and I was like:

"I PRAISE YOU, WOMAN!"

idk.

I don't usually like Twincest. But this is wonderful.

so I just found this story. & would like more

same thing as above about the updating....I love the story! you're a great writer! i read some of your stories and sorry i didn't comment but i loved them tooo. ^.^

This story is incredible..
It is soo well written.

I'm love with it i do believe hehe:}

but omg! i hope she like dies or something!!

poor, poor Bill.. how much more can the poor boy take??

it looks like you havent updated in awhile...

PLEASE for the sake of my sanity update soon!

<3

I would loooove if you kept updating this! It's so good!
I agree with the comment above me!

and I definitely guessed at her want for him ever since the Call of Duty incident. boo, that whore. I hope she gets hit by a car. Bill is in suuuuch big trouble. =(

things Hey Jude LOVES about your writing:
1. Realistic emotions
2. Sentence structore
3. word choice
4. realistic situations
5. charicterization
6. plot developement
dude, i just love your writing, ok?! keep up the amazing work! :D

if you love your readers and subscribers...

you'll update more :]

yay!