The first paragraph of this is me. Completely. Haha. I'm always stretching and then it hits me: Shit. It's Monday.
The only thing I have to complain about this is that it seems like a set of instructions. If that makes any sense. It's like we're only following Lainey's morning routine, not really delving into what she's thinking at the moment, or anything.
Everything else looks pretty spotless, I was pleasantly surprised with your grammar. I'd like to see how Lainey and Mason's relationship develops.
The only thing I have to complain about this is that it seems like a set of instructions. If that makes any sense. It's like we're only following Lainey's morning routine, not really delving into what she's thinking at the moment, or anything.
Everything else looks pretty spotless, I was pleasantly surprised with your grammar. I'd like to see how Lainey and Mason's relationship develops.