June 4th, 2015 at 03:07am
I actually love this story. It is beautifully written. I'm just getting started on it even though it's been apart of my comment swap forever! This covers the first five chapters or so.
First of all, I absolutely adore Iris. She's that girl that I would love to be my best friend. She's funny and carefree. I love how she was developed. Victoria is just as awesome. I love that she's had a bit of a past and doesn't want to be attached to someone. A woman doesn't have to want a relationship. She can just want sex. So love her.
I also love the little exchange at how Iris is having the time of her life with the 1D boys while it seems that Victoria will have a bit more trouble especially with her one night stand. All in all, this story is going to be awesome. I can't wait to finish it.
Aw! How absolutely sweet of you! I haven't thought about this story in so long and I know my coauthor hasn't either but wow your comment made my day! (: