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  • harley is awkward.

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    Aw! How absolutely sweet of you! I haven't thought about this story in so long and I know my coauthor hasn't either but wow your comment made my day! (:
    June 4th, 2015 at 03:07am
  • K.Monroe

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    I actually love this story. It is beautifully written. I'm just getting started on it even though it's been apart of my comment swap forever! This covers the first five chapters or so.

    First of all, I absolutely adore Iris. She's that girl that I would love to be my best friend. She's funny and carefree. I love how she was developed. Victoria is just as awesome. I love that she's had a bit of a past and doesn't want to be attached to someone. A woman doesn't have to want a relationship. She can just want sex. So love her.

    I also love the little exchange at how Iris is having the time of her life with the 1D boys while it seems that Victoria will have a bit more trouble especially with her one night stand. All in all, this story is going to be awesome. I can't wait to finish it.
    May 30th, 2015 at 06:33am
  • DePrEsSiOn_PoEm

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    Beautiful, write more. ♥
    December 31st, 2014 at 07:22pm
  • DePrEsSiOn_PoEm

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    Beautiful, write more. ♥
    December 31st, 2014 at 07:22pm
  • harley is awkward.

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    @ KrickLovesYa
    Um... Thanks cx but I'm there will be one last thing added to this story so hang tight for the epilogue. And you know you can always check out one of our other stories haha.
    July 29th, 2013 at 07:47pm
  • KrickLovesYa

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    Omg no i dont want it to be over ahhh ima go crazy now i have to find a story to take the place of this one and i dont wanna this was an amazayn story and i absolouis love it
    July 29th, 2013 at 03:47pm
  • musiclovex3

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    I can't believe that happened. Its so sad!
    July 12th, 2013 at 04:47pm
  • Chloe Gray

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    No. Nope. She was supposed to be with Louis. Its not okay.
    June 27th, 2013 at 10:47pm
  • ChemicalCandy96

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    Her dad better be okay! And you two have created this complex love triangle where I completely understand why she chose Niall but I would have also completely understood if she chose Louis. Well fucking done. And Harry and Iris, so cute <3
    June 25th, 2013 at 03:30am
  • Adleigh_Lynn212

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    YES YES YES!!!!!
    I'm so happy that Niall was the one there and that she finally was able to come clean with everything!Also that he accepts her plus the insanity is a beautiful thing was an amazing quote!Im loving where this is going and I really hope her dad is okay.
    Can't wait for more!:)
    June 19th, 2013 at 03:55am
  • KrickLovesYa

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    so so so good and thanks for the gifs i love them
    June 18th, 2013 at 05:09pm
  • Chloe Gray

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    Denial.. I wanted her with Louis.
    June 18th, 2013 at 05:40am
  • Chloe Gray

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    "Woop, there it is" literally played in my head at the end of that chapter. I'm just now getting to this updated. I'm sorry! I loved it and have been waiting for Louis to pull his head out if his ass for a while. Congrats Louis! And in unrelated news, good belated luck for you learners license. :)
    June 7th, 2013 at 07:25am
  • Marshyline

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    I found this today and I love it! I can't wait to read what happens next!
    May 31st, 2013 at 08:31pm
  • littlemisslonely

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    Drama bomb! Haha. I'm so excited to find out what happens next.
    May 31st, 2013 at 06:27pm
  • Adleigh_Lynn212

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    Damn it Louis!Too much at once.
    I hope that Louis and Niall backs off though since their arguing isn't helping anything.Even though I want her with Niall, this extra emotional shit isn't helping anyone.
    Please update again soon and her dad be okay!!!!
    May 31st, 2013 at 04:37pm
  • Adleigh_Lynn212

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    Nooooooooo I really hope she makes it in time!
    Everything is so screwed up but I am glad Niall is being there for her....gives hope but I almost cried when she said her dad is dying:(
    More soon please!
    May 16th, 2013 at 06:51am
  • Chloe Gray

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    I waited 28 days -_- It was torture.
    May 16th, 2013 at 05:26am
  • KrickLovesYa

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    love it love love love it
    April 20th, 2013 at 10:25pm
  • Chloe Gray

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    Poor Niall. I feel so bad for him. Make the pain stop! Love the update <3
    April 17th, 2013 at 08:19am