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  • hkychk

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    Oh my gosh oh my gosh!!!! I hate cliffhangers!!!!!!!! But I love this story! I know I don't really comment but I love reading it!
    February 16th, 2013 at 04:18am
  • Adleigh_Lynn212

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    Noooooooo!!!!You're so cruel leaving the chapter like that!I can't handle it haha
    Anyway this is a great story!:D
    I really love both of the girls.They both bring great things to the table.I really wanna punch Louis in the face though.He needs to figure out what he wants and stop putting Victoria in a bad place.Part of my really wants Iris to give Harry a chance but then another part of me is guessing that he'll screw it up or maybe even she will.Who knows but you guys haha.
    Pleaseeee pleassseeee update soon!!!!I wanna know who knows about Louis and Victoria!!!
    February 16th, 2013 at 01:43am
  • alwaysadreamer

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    I think I actually meant the character Iris, but I guess the author aka Harley is kind of the one in control so yeah. It's late and I'm babbling.
    January 28th, 2013 at 07:05am
  • alwaysadreamer

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    If Harley doesn't mention something about what just happened there, I am done. (Lol jk no I'm not)
    January 28th, 2013 at 07:04am
  • imbetterthenyou

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    i like it update soon please:)
    January 19th, 2013 at 12:49am
  • Caitosaur.

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    I dunno. I feel like Harry was a complete twat in the beginning of the Iris bit and now he's being mopey because she's avoiding him because he was creepy as fuck when it's his own fucking fault. If some guy did that to me I wouldn't take the job, I mean that's straight up sexual harassment and she should sue him or something.
    Also your Liam gif nearly gave me a seizure as I tried to write this comment.
    January 18th, 2013 at 10:32am
  • Caitosaur.

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    aha! It links!
    January 18th, 2013 at 10:11am
  • Caitosaur.

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    okay you asked me to read because updates (and man I've been behind so I started over and am just finished chapter 6) and I've got to say that I'm really fucking confused about the timeline between chapters. So far it feels like two entirely different stories alternating like a light switch. I'm assuming they'll be linked later but for now it's just weird.
    January 18th, 2013 at 09:37am
  • Martykk

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    I love it so far. :) Ahahaha I love both of them so much!
    January 11th, 2013 at 12:09am
  • sportsfanatic19

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    Just found this story but i like it already. And i like her big loud family
    January 9th, 2013 at 05:26am
  • taylooooooooooor

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    I hate it when the good stories dont get enough attention! This is honestly one of my favorite stories so far.
    January 3rd, 2013 at 10:42pm
  • ILoveNiallHoran

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    I love this story!
    I get so happy when I get a email that its updated! :D
    January 3rd, 2013 at 01:49pm
  • imbetterthenyou

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    i like it and i think its good update soon please :p
    January 3rd, 2013 at 05:27am
  • harley is awkward.

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    @ LoveChange
    Thx a bunch!
    January 2nd, 2013 at 01:37am
  • LoveChange

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    I absolutely LOVE THIS STORY. The way you write is amazing and I can't wait for another update :):):):):):)
    Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green
    January 2nd, 2013 at 01:24am
  • harley is awkward.

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    @ viralstorm
    oh yea... i forgot. i might have already I don't remember.
    December 29th, 2012 at 04:55pm
  • viralstorm

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    @ bumble_babe554
    U can change it :) u have the POWER! Wink
    December 29th, 2012 at 04:52pm
  • harley is awkward.

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    yo courtney you sort of changed pov "surprised by his sudden change of heart SHE" <--- should be I
    December 29th, 2012 at 09:55am
  • harley is awkward.

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    @ Caitosaur.
    you are my favorite person EVER!

    and as for your questions...
    *Jessica isn't new you'll find that out in my next chapter. Since Iris is my character, if you have any questions about my chapters then feel free.
    *the shirtless guysssssss are her neighbors that she thinks is hot but I'll get to that later.
    *as for the last one, which is about Victoria, i think she just wanted a different take on Louis's personality.

    Hope that helped!
    December 25th, 2012 at 08:21am
  • Caitosaur.

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    Omfg. I figured out where to find serious pictures of Harry. Gotta photoshop Taylor Swift out of them though.
    BURN.
    December 25th, 2012 at 06:29am